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The Best Revenge
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The Best Revenge |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Peek-a-boo Here I am Heart in hand Once again. Can you believe I fell so hard Oh what a laugh Its so absurd. To think that I A cynical fool Could be taken in By such as you. I laugh out loud At the tears inside So who's to know All the nights I cried. I write my story Here in this verse I tell myself Not to scream and curse. At the heart that lied And made passionate vows Tell me this? Where are you now? Do I hold the pain Go on loving you Or get the best revenge And find someone new. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ouch! Whoa! Definitely gave me the chills there!  Wonderfully expressed! (although the feelings are far from wonderful)  sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't waste time on revenge or anything else...if you are ready to find someone else then do it. Revenge and the thought of it will just take away your happiness in your next relationship. Not worth it.... Alot of emotion in this one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula nice expression of your feelings... the best way to get satisfaction is to let it go and get on with the important business in your life...finding happiness with yourself and with someone new...it really works...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ Powerful piece, understand how you feel but hon revenge and jealousy and hatred and all those other horrible feelings we have at times only eat away at our souls...look to the future and be happy and you'll find all you need and want isn't too far out of reach Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The best revenge is to have class, because when it's all said and done YOU know you are worthy of someone better. Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OK OK I guess I didnt express this very well...the whole point was geting on with my life...the best revenge is to forget him and find someone new... sp...no not the most pleasant of emotions...but the price you pay for being willing to love. Mark...gee I thought you knew me better...lol I am not after revenge...just want to get on with my life. James...yep and thats just what I am doing...as you well know LOL Tracie...thank you and I know...like I said I guess I just didnt express this as well as I thought Irish Rose...well I thought I was being pretty classy I didnt name names or scream and yell LOL...thanks |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very expressive Paula ... I read power and positive action through these words! It's true that the best revenge is moving on to someone new ... well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Right on Paula Excellent poem! Take me for revenge meet ya in front of his house! Just kidding about the revenge part. I'll come over there!LOL  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kit...thank you I am glad you understood. Insect...oh lol my friend...you just come right ahead...I'll bring the toilet paper you bring the soap and we will get him good HAHAHAHA...thank you |
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