Open Poetry #10 |
That’s My Love" [for Hoot_Owl and her husband] |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
That’s My Love < !signature-->Once upon a lifetime goes you by secretly met the one who’s made you feel your soul could fly their the one who made you finally come alive the one who touched you in exactly the right place no one else could ever find they move through your spirit filling your soul and mate letting you see yourself through different light showing you how you are and become presenting the things you can accomplish once of course through a lifetime there’s just one love that will endure the quiz of time it’s a love so strong it’s a love so true it’s a love that through all hardships will survive... it’s my love for you. * * * If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--This is so beautiful...and I am so happy for Ruth...who is just starting...and then look at you...with your rich time treasured tapistry...you and Rosemary are treasures! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was very sweet and thoughtful of you! A wonderful tribute to the both of them. I'm sure she'll love it! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie, I love so your writes you have changed so much. Well, I like it..! WhtDove, I don't hear from you often, I tip my hat that you would notice. thank you. Dale |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Lucky - you have the most unique poetic talent I've ever encountered - this is beautiful |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is one of my favorites of yours of all time, my sweetheart! It's such a good one to share with hoot owl, in this time of her joy! Wonderfully done! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Bill, so you think I have a unique poetic talent. Thanks my friend Rosemary I'm glad you thought of this one to post for her as I was reading to you yonder night. Your my sweet baby_bubba and I know it's one of your favorites, she'll love it... But hopefully at this time..; she's pre-occupied. many thanks, dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Beautifully done, Dale. I'm sure they'll love your gift. Dee |
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