Open Poetry #10 |
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Mina my Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Mina my Love A joy for my ears to hear to make my weary heart rejoice soothing words taking my blues away as found within the sweetness of your voice. A happy heart receives your call believing someone cares for me afterall. A desire to be friends and lovers too all my love I'll give to you. Oh how I love to feel the softness of you and see the effervescence of a lovely tan while touching silky soft skin flowing within my eager hand. Walking in the mall without you would be a bore now two can enjoy this movie called "The Art of War". Mina my Love I take this momemt to caress your silky legs I adore and I deeply desire this touch and more. Later outside the gentle trade winds are flowing thru the graceful palm trees and while lying in the park with you under stately banyon trees my heart ponders my love for you and I have to take this moment in time to hope and pray I'll always be yours and you'll be mine. Oh how I admire the woman that you are and appreciate everything you say and do and Mina my Love the favorite part of my day is when I'm spending time with you. Jameslee@October07,2000 LovemyMina |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
James, this is so beautiful, as all your other poetry, truly from the heart. it's always a pleasure to read your poems, and Mina is truly lucky to have a man that adore's her.....well done ![]() Charisma |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely James..I use to live in Hawaii ten years ago..and loved it...got to be too far away from things for me but sometimes i wonder why i moved ha ha..but the banyon trees and palm trees and the ocean is what inspired me to write poetry...very sweet poem. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James~ you go straight for the heart in your work. very lovely, beautiful, a and full of grace. i am very happy for you and mina. tis a lucky thing one finds when they come across true love. take care. amy ![]() "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
This is great, I just can't work up enough courage to post my poetry, everyone else's is so neat! But soon I will For now I just love reading all of it. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James my friend. . . I cannot begin to say enough about how wonderful your writing has become since Mina. . . truly my friend, she has inspired you and stolen your heart. . . I am happy for both of you. . . This is just a wonderful example of that. . . Well done. . . ![]() -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhh sweetbabyjames ... ya know we love ya in love... and your wearing it well and looking sharp... this is a tender, sincere, look at her thru your eyes ... its a thing of beauty to behold ![]() wonderful words ... she does indeed inspire sweet things in you later-in-love-gator jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Charisma, Victoria, amy, emily, Sven and Janet for beautiful responses...I am so happy... emily I am patiently waiting for your post...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I wish my man would write for me this way......jeez, you are such a romantic man......women must fall all over themselves around you. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea...perhaps he will someday...I agree with you that I am romantic but women do not take any special notice of me...well sometimes they do but not as often as I would like...anyway Mina is the most beautiful woman in Hawaii and I have my hands full admiring her...James |
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