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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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0 posted 2000-10-07 06:34 PM

A Walk in the Gray

I've tried to love but failed,
in my eyes, I only see gray.
The clouds are now rolling in
reaching dewpoint, the rains come my way.

I've tried to love but failed,
something inside me has died.
The quiet before a new storm,
has numbed me to all that I've tried.

Is it useless to want what's forbidden?
If a bite of it I should take,
will I suffer the fears, I have hidden
or share in a love, what's at stake?

I've tried to love but failed,
to see further than day by day.
It's cost has burdened my soul,
needing more than a walk in the gray.

M
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Horizon
Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 51

1 posted 2000-10-07 07:01 PM

So very sad, I have felt like that, not knowing what to do. A great poem and I enjoyed reading this.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2000-10-07 07:33 PM

*whipe a tear away* can relate on this too....enjoyed reading it.
((huge hug))

Charisma

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

3 posted 2000-10-07 08:24 PM

M~ Richly poetic words of pain and fear.

reaching dewpoint the rains come my way...

Tears near to falling I hear here, and I know all to well this feeling shared by many.

Deb

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-10-07 08:34 PM

You didnt fail maureen..life is just full of changes..and it will change for the best eventually for you..HUGSS

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2000-10-07 11:40 PM

Maureen, may you walk on top of rainbows soon, slide down and find your gold...this is what I pray for you

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2000-10-08 12:02 PM

You've expressed such sorrow amongst these lines, yet with such beauty Maureen. I hope the colours in your world will begin to shine radiantly to lift your spirits and light the way in answer to these tender questions. Very well written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2000-10-08 12:19 PM

Black & White - turns to technicolor - Rainbows are still real - when your heart is ready - you'll recall these words
and you'll always be a poet.~S~

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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8 posted 2000-10-08 08:23 AM

Horizon

Oh I know what I have to do I just can't find the energy at the moment to do it..thank you for visiting my words and leaving some of yours
~~soft hugs
Maureen

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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9 posted 2000-10-08 10:53 AM

Charisma

I am sorry if anyone has to relate to these feelings...
thank you for reading
{{hugs}}
M

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