»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #10
»
Shallows in the Deep
| Open Poetry #10 |
|
Shallows in the Deep |
|
|
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
|
Catching me whole Connecting to that in which Does not exist Lost inside the void Of dissolution and threads Caught up in the wind Robbing the thoughts That come waking up Seething through my skin Attempting to disqualify What truly lies beneath All that is kept inside Is not all that one can see Heart throbbing in pain Knowing deep down the truth Fingers throbbing hurting "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do realize this may seem like other poems of mine...but I just simply typed this out...these are feelings and probably should have been put in "FEELINGS" but it is a poem. I am finding that my best and most successful way to communicate is this way so here it is..... |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I think this is very well done, Bridgett... You've expressed yourself nicely - We've all experience hurting "right down to our fingertips..."....  |
||
|
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Nan!!! Nice to see you!! And that is soo true "down to the fingertips"!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bridgette~ Expressing ourselves through poetry is what us poets do best and you've done just that extremely well  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I agree with Tracie, a wonderful expression. Glad to see you back! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Good to see you back in here with the rest of us with those aching fingers. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful thoughts Bridgette ... it's amazing what bubbles up from deep within, when we allow ourselves to really listen. Excellent writing here! Best wishes, /Kit |
||
|
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Tracie Thanks...it's great to think someone says I express my feelings well!!! And then you EagleOne agree with her...Thanks!!  I'm always happy to be in here...it makes me feel great to know I have online friends....but I don't always feel this way....often I feel kinda alone!! Thank You Marge...it's nice to see your friendly words!! It is interesting what does "bubble up"....too bad it's not always good...but yet sometimes it is!!! Thank You Kit.... It is great to see you back...I hope you are doing well!!! Bridgette< !signature--> "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 10-08-2000).] |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
