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Open Poetry #10

Not Really

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-10-07 05:43 PM

starting with just a title...

~Not Really~

I tried to walk away from you
not really
Do you need me now?
not quite
Did I say that outloud?
I hope not
Do you understand me?
not exactly
where are you love?
falling far away
come back to me love
and say you'll stay
do you need me now love?
not really
are you afraid of me?
i didn't think so
do you treat me this way because you love me?
do you walk away to keep your sanity?
not really...

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2000-10-07 06:25 PM

was there too and can relate on it..
hope that things will be better soon.
good write

Charisma

Horizon
Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 51

2 posted 2000-10-07 06:31 PM

I hear ya, been there. Wonderful poem, I enjoyed the read.

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

3 posted 2000-10-08 02:29 AM

thanks for the replies guys...but i really dont like this one at all...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-10-08 03:32 AM

Nik I liked this poem....not really...actually I did enjoy it...James

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2000-10-08 10:48 PM

Nik hon...doesnt matter if you like it baby...as long as you write your heart...

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