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Of Love and Friendship
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Of Love and Friendship |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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 Senyrus of Love and Friendship ~~*~~ Eyes Golden flecks of brown meshing with green in this night valley of truth found ~~*~~ Heart Thunder residing within small chambers of love knowledge now assured ~~*~~ Soul Whispers heard in wind with gentle truth in this night as two souls connect ~~*~~ Kiss Warmth of love resting in moistured breeches of care as our lips caress ~~*~~ Touch Tingles of needles surging ripples escalate fingers now entwined Mark Christopher [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well you have out done yourself this time ha ha..very lovely Mark..  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Haiku in the night to greet the day in sunlight how blessed all shall be This is absolutely beautiful, Mr. Bohannan! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much said...so perfectly ...in so few sweet words ... sometimes .. less is more ... I've learned a lot about both Love and Friendship from you. later-got-the best-graphics-gator me |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, as I said before you just get better. Since I'm running out of praise for you I shall give you an ovation, well it's either that or bouquets, and you have your own roses, so take your bows, and no false modesty. Love this Marsha  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ Oh......yes, this is the best yet!!!! You, my friend, are like a diamond in a black velvet sky.......glittering brighter each moment!! What a special writing this is, and thank you so much for sharing something that is this beautiful!!  Follow your dream! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Soul" "Whispers heard in wind with gentle truth in this night as two souls connect" All are incredibly wonderful Mark, but I like to choose when you give me so much to ponder ... so if I must dare myself, then "Soul" t'would be my favorite. There's something about the beauty of two souls meeting that you've captured so sweetly here. All are simply lovely Mark! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You are amazingly talented, my friend. I enjoyed the Touch. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A prayer of love is seen in the beauty of the rose. Whispers of gentle truth ring quietly in this most beautiful way with words you have deb |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful work my friend...you've inspired me to try my first Senyrus. ~A gift to you~ *Butterfly Kiss* Fluttering Breezes Whisper of heaven's sweet breath Dusted with loves light ~*~ *Angelwing Hugs* Feathery Cover Hearts joined in softest embrace Quiet comforts touch ~*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I don't know which is more beautiful, the images or the poem but together-wow! Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Victoria-Thank you much and they are actually sort of easy once you get going. Karilea- Upon the visions of nights in dreams of lovers come passions untold ~~*~~ Mystical magic moving mountains majesty more memories made JM-I too have learned alot from you my friend and I do thank you for your ever encourageing words. Thanks my bud and sweet friend. Marsha-"bowing" and whispering thank you so very much for you Sunny1-Thank you much and a big thank you for smiling when you kiss me Kit-My friend I do thank you and I appreciate you picking out the one that you like most. Marge-I too enjoy that one as I do enjoy touch even when it is as simple as two friends holding hands in silence Deb-Sometimes whispers are heard more clearly than words shouted and I hope in this case it is true for that special angel out there. Thank you my friend. Holly- With depth of vision eyes of green delight see all holding close friendship ~~*~~ Beneath surface told lies awakenings of two hearts tomorrows song sung You did a marvelous job on your first ones and I thank you for giving them to me on my post my friend. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Irish Rose-You snuck in on me LOL...now stop that will ya. I hope that you find the beauty in each equally nice and soft in your eyes. Thank you much. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: beautiful writing.....love it and enjoyed it.....so simply in beauty. Charisma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Mark, I kept skimming past this. Senryu's... I just love them. One of my favourite forms to write in multiples. You do them with great flair, so you'll probably be saying how sonnets are easy after awhile too. Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Charisma-Thank you so much. I am glad you liked them. Parker-If I ever finish my first sonnet that is LOL....thank you my friend. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
beauty to behold deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deb-Thank you for the revisit....those mean so much to me. For you to take the time makes me feel special and that my works maybe left a little something. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
As I was wandering from piece to piece responding, I had to take a time out and read this over and over again. It touched me. DEEP!!! I think that you wrote this at a time when I needed it the most without knowing it and me. So thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ladycat-If they helped you then I am happier now than I was a minute ago and I am happy anyway. I am glad that you found comfort in them, that is one of the reasons why I write. Thank you so much for letting me know. Hugs to you as I feel you could use them. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ you pull the *SIGHS* out of me so easily....you have such a way....by the way, love the middle name....... -SEA |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
< !signature--> Excellent writing my friend. [This message has been edited by Martinque (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Are you purposely trying to steal my heart, my friend??? LOL  If you keep writing these lovely Senryu's that is just what is going to happen! I can't wait for your first Sonnet. I have no doubt it will be just as lovely...... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--these are pictures of your heart, cowboy...and they are beautiful! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SEA-I thank you for being so sweet all the time and giving me all those *sighs* but how am I gonna explain the constant drool to my sweetie????LOL thank you thank you thank you and you may continue to drool ..... she will just have to understand.LOL...(crossing fingers and hoping she does understand)  Martinque-Thank you dearly Marina-Yeppers I am so what took you so long..LOL...do ya know how to handle a cowboy my sweet? Thank you for you sweet replies always(BTW-my number is 1-900-cwboy up...now don't go a spredin that around okay?)  Martie-Better than x-rays aren't they? Thank you my friend.....I always treasure your kind words. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, I very nearly got shot, by my collegues, for not giving their replies to our official office poet. (So if I don't want to be put aginst the wall and shot, and I don't) here goes........ I like this I like this a lot Sue Oh wow Daphne This is such a beauty, Jan How does he do that? Delia Oh this is even nicer that the last one Pat Great David Lovely Mel What a gift this is Fran This is a good poem Kelsy Thanks our offical office poet, have a good week  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
To Sue, Daphne, Jan, Delia, Pat, David, Mel, Fran, Kelsy, and of course Marsha--Thank you all so very much and I am so glad that you all get to read my works. I will continue to try and find the inspiration to write ones that you all enjoy and if I ever let you down....JUST DON'T TELL ME OKAY???LOL You guys are all great!!!!! Thank you much. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I'm glad you put this back on the top or I wouldn't have noticed it (sorry). I love your work, this included. Dee |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ does she get jealous?! *SIGH* get a mop....   now just add auburn hair and well, ya know. [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- wow! i don't know how these snuck by me for a few days, but i'm glad i finally found them. these are just beautiful. i love them. your talent never ceases to amaze me. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, Simply beautiful my haiku friend. I don't know how you do it. ~sighs~. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ah Mark....this was sooo beautiful and tender!! Very nice writing!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dee-Thank you and never forget to check ALL the pages...you never now what you may miss. SEA-No she let's me play but knows that I will eventually come home so we are safe and why mop when there will more in just minutes anyway.....and BTW...the cutie you left me is a pretty one indeed but she doesn't come close to the beauty of you and besides....a bit tall to just change the hair wouldn't you say? Vicky-And you responses to me never cease to amaze ME. Thank you so very much my friend. I do so appreciate you. rosepetals25-You keep "sighing" and I will keep a trying for more okay? Thank you my friend of 5-7-5. Bridgette-Thank you so much and I am glad that you found them beautiful. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ I'm glad she let's you play...mine is very jealous! And what is wrong with tall? I happen to be tall........ -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh nothing wrong with tall at all my sweet!!!! Love having more territory to cover . Twas a joke on the 1" doll you left me with. Now just how tall are you or is that confidential info.LOL Standing height only please the other I prefer to find out myself as I explore the territory  (you know with all them thar kisses I have in my "SADDLE BAGS" for you. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ well, I'm 5' 7 & 1/2....now you give...how tall are you? -SEA you can't be THAT short.....[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- sweet, gentle cowboy missing you on blue pages ride back in real soon just missing you today, and thought i'd bump some of your oldies so we don't have to be completely without our resident cowboy. big hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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