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Fully Clothed
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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You came fully clothed, For you were heaven sent, A robe of love covered your beauty Tempted by the fact to peek inside I open the dress to see what you hide Touching the ground the robe fell apart Seeing you disappeared weakened my heart Now I’m left here standing What will happen now has left me pondering Every day I appear with nothing worn Wishing your arrival in that lovely robe. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Wow....I'm so drawn by this piece....and so intrigued. There are many ways I can interpret this.... Not knowing what your meaing behind this...What ever it is.... I so much enjoyed reading this piece. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
meaning is left for the reader to discover. Tell me your interpations people. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Ronil...I missed this the first time thru...hhmmmm...well I think she is your dream...and you recreate her every time you feel the need... |
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