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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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WICCAN FUN (A Pantoum)  Gather 'round my little sweets - Cackling, Cackling, Sorceress Time is nigh for Trick or Treats Gainsay ye wont WickedNess Cackling, Cackling, Sorceress Big black bats for lamian stew Gainsay ye wont WickedNess Bubbling, bubbling brimful brew Big black bats for lamian stew Come join in my Wiccan fun Bubbling, bubbling brimful brew You shall see how magick's done Come join in my Wiccan fun Churning, Churning changelings do You shall see how magick's done We'll make ghouls of all of you Churning, Churning changelings do Closer, Closer, cauldron's call We'll make ghouls of all of you Halloween spooks one and all Closer, Closer, cauldron's call Time is nigh for Trick or Treats Halloween spooks one and all Gather 'round my little sweets. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's like I always say..."there's a little bit of witch in everyone..." LOL... Now, you must explain what a "pantoun" is, and of course this is perfect! Y'made me smile this nite, My Pretty!!! EEE HEE HEE HEE |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A most enjoyable read Nan, hehe love it! Maree |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can hear the cackling and crackling!! This is delightful, Nan! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ohhhhh yes...fun... and in season and on time... and yet another poetic lesson to be learned from the teacher ... oh no..more homework  thank you for the trick...it was a treat later-teach-us-new-poetry-tricks-gator jm |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
what an awesome poem. the style is totally unique. i've never seen that before, but it makes for a fun read! i adore the images here. spookular! Passions Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hey, Nanners!  This was cute! I love the style too.  My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I read this aloud and my clock struck 13 ... what could this mean?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I'll have me a cup of witches brew.Wonderful Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Delightful play ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Nan! I loved the flow and form in this ... what a perfect style for such a Halloweeny piece! I could almost hear the voices around the cauldron reciting this over and over ... great fun! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Pretty Wicc-ed Nan! What is this style called? fh |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What great fun this is! Think I'll show it to my kids! Corinne |
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Horizon Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 51 |
Dontcha just love Halloween? It's one of my favorite times of year. Great Poem Nan it gets me in the spirit. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh how fun... I shall join in the "Wiccan Fun"!!! I LOVE Halloween and always have!! It was a haunting picture dancing in my thoughts!! Very fun Nan!! This was good!! Take Care, Bridgette  < !signature-->"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you all my pretties... serenity - I always knew you had it in you... and you'll have to join the workshop to find out more..  Maree - Thankeeooooo... Do you guys celebrate Halloween? I surely hope everyone enjoys the lighthearted "Trick or Treatin'" fun we all have here... Denise - Yep - definitely some cacophonous cacklin' happenin'.. JM - Shhhhhh.... Don't tell - This was last year's homework - I turned it in again this year... Ethan - Thanks - The Pantoum and its repetitions are indeed perfect for the flavor of a Halloween poem... Jenn - Mucho Danke.... We've shared many a poetic holiday, haven't we??... Rex - Um.... You'll be needing a new clock??... ... BOO HOO... Sy - Just drop on by, my Sweet.. Marge - We've gotta get our Halloweeny kicks any way we can, ya know?.. Kit - Thanks muchly - I think I'm taking a trip to Salem before Haloween - Just to get in the spirit... Fred - Hey! Fancy seein' you Hobblin' here... It's a Pantoum...(see above, ya silly Goblin...)... Corinne - Goody - They can help me stir up the pot... Horizon - I've been known to turn the tables - Dress up & meet 'em at the door with my own wicc-ed plan... Bridgette - How nice to see you... and your black cat... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Doubly good - I think most missed the double difficulty of making a good poem a Pantoum as well -two crowns for you I say (I curse when I choose to subject myself to these repeating forms ) |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thankya Wil... *impish grin*... I'm afraid I have to challenge you to join the workshop this month then - considering your maudlin masochistic curse for repetition... |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
yepr very fun and nicely done |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Halloweeny Bump !! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Happy Halloween....this is too good to get lost on Halloween!!!! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Adorable Nan! And I love pantoums too! A great halloween one. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, workshop, workshop where are you how can I write a pantoum or two Nan can do it Marge can too without instructions I'm in a stew. Excellent write for halloween Nan Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loved the graphics..and pantoums are one of my favorite forms. This was a real Halloween treat, Nan. Thank you. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
beee witchin nanny!!!!  (but I always thought we made ourselves ghouls -- lol -- ) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nancy - your writings are just amazing. Bill |
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