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A way into wayoutwalt
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A way into wayoutwalt |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A way into wayoutwalt For his warped sense of reality Words not written in haste I called a brain searcher From a brain searcher place. The Doctor rode over On a three legged horse, His nurse by his side, With a jack-hammer of course Into Walt’s head we will wander To see what twisted things we will find Or maybe we won’t And that will be fine To his head we attached A blue clock with six dynamite sticks “In Just a few moments”, said the Doc “We’ll see how Walt ticks” The explosion was loud There was an echoing boom We all walked right in And it wasn't to soon A flamingo with a cigarette Tucked there in his beak Gave me a wink And gave the nurse a nice tweak We went through a closed door Not attached to a room Saw a bucket of ice water Balanced on top of a broom We kicked some old beer cans Through a hole in the wall Out came an ump Who screamed out "FOUL BALL!" We then followed a sign That said, Please Go This Way>>>>> And we came right back again To the start of the circular maze The doc put down had his spy glass So I asked for a solution, "What do you think, Doctor?" He spoke, "I've come to a conclusion" "Empty”. Said the doctor “There’s nothing in here,... er…” “Wait!”, he then cried out “It’s all done with mirrors!” The doctor then smiled Said,“I’ve had a good time.” His nurse blowing bubbles, Followed behind. I asked if he knew, "Have you found it out, Sir" He nodded his head, saying "Yuh, Yuh, Yuh." So we left Walt’s head I was still in a daze Because I still don’t understand Half of the things that he says. (I do understand...it just fits with the poem...yuh) < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ this is so fun!! Wonderful job!! Walt is fantastic and I'm sure he'll enjoy this wonderful poem for him, I still like mine better!!  -SEA |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFL - this is cute! Walt's a -yeah- he... umm... yeah...  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Interesting! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This rocks...so do you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ron my man, you are just simply amazing my friend. He is going to love this and I cant wait to see how he responds to it. Now if you listen real close you can pick up what he is saying but any outside noises or distractions can make you miss the all important stuff. LOL....excellent write again from you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
His head is not empty As you will soon see It has all kinds of wonders Imaginably... A kind hearted poet who brings one to laugh and then he writes seriously his stuff such a gas Then there's just way out As way out can be But he'll always be the best of the poets to me!  Oops, forgot to say I LOVED IT!!! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RonFox~ Just THINK, Scarecrow ! The Tin Man went to the Wizard for a HEART .. Here we spell that wayoutwalt ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Ron, this is Wayyyyy outtttt!!! I liked it. I like reading his way out words too. You've a real talent for capturing your friends here at Passions in verse, my poetic pal, and I admire you for that. (Oh, and Woodrow may have gotten his kiss, but we still maintain separate castles) Take care, Rainydays |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
how do you get to the center of a wayoutwalt roll wayout pop? how do you get to the twisted mind of wayoutwalt a little screw here a little screw there i was told in good faith i could say that so blug blug my baby whenever he sees a slug bug, btw, says bug bug ron you kicked with this i was laughing in the behavioral sciences building at the uni and peeps where about to come over and analyze me but durn if they got distracted by rampaging diapered combat ready monkee commandos or at least thaz way i saw it but yuh in a nutshell: yuh!! your the best i was truely touched and i liked it |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Yer welcome Wayout! you've entertained me since I've gotten here, So here's to you,(toasting with a glass of milk) yuh. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I think you just scratched the surface...Walts like an onion...layer after layer after layer...each one a joy to behold |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
well thanky paula its true i am an awesome blossom |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Yuh Yuh..yawp, yeppers, uh huh.....fits like a wet-t on Candy Samples..yuh..but I didn't say that...nwyap...nope..uhuh. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL! Hmmm...Finally, a view! What a cute poem for a wonderful friend! |
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