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Two Angels (for Marge)
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Two Angels (for Marge) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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two angels float on clouds above- watch over you and send their love and as the sunrise greets your morn with angel dust skies they adorn when sunshine gently bathes your face you'll recognize their warm embrace and when you feel a cooling breeze they're fanning you with angel wings as daylight fades and stars awaken feel not lonely or forsaken know as you wish on brightest star two angels bless you from afar ~with love and hugs to Marge~ -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
vlraynes~ I'm sure when Marge reads this it will help in her reflections of her sisters life and at this sad time, you have posted a most wonderful and tender piece for her and I know she will appreciate it dearly. HUGS Tracie~ There is a saying "actions speak louder than words" But I sure hear your words pretty loudly....well done  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Yes, love and hugs for Marge She's been better than a best friend to me. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Vicky~ How very touched I am by this lovely presentation in keeping with my memory of my mother and my sister. It's so beautiful ... it should be submitted to Hallmark ! And I mean that. You've been a rock to me in these past days and you need to know how much I've appreciated your love and caring. What a wonderful friend I bumped into one night in The Pub ... I'm so thankful for you. All of the e-mails that have lit my day with a smile have been so appreciated. The loving thoughts of the cards have kept my heart comforted in the night. I love you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
tracie66- thanks for the kind words. i'm sure Marge will appreciate reading your thoughtful response. She is definitely in my thoughts and prayers. lucky- Yes, Marge is certainly one of a kind. I just love her. Thanks for reading. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- ...my special friend. I am so happy this touched you. I know this has been a difficult week for you, and I'm glad I was able to give you a smile here and there. You need to know as well, how much I appreciate you. You have made me feel welcome here at passions right from the start. You have given me so much encouragement and praise. You are a wonderful friend and I love you dearly. Know that you will continue to be in my thoughts and prayers. God bless you and your family. I love you, Marge, -vicky P.S. Thank you so much for the compliment on the poem. It means alot coming from you. love you. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky, A wonderful poem for a very special lady!! This is perfect for her in her time of need. Marge, Wishing you nothing but the best my friend. You will see them again one day.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
-------- and when you feel a cooling breeze they're fanning you with angel wings as daylight fades and stars awaken feel not lonely or forsaken -------------- wow. outstanding sentiments and an easy rhythm. beautiful indeed. I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates, who said, "I drank what?" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lone Wolf- Yes, Marge is a very special lady. Thanks for reading and for passing on your comforting thoughts to Marge. Ethan- Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed. The sentiments came naturally because of the hard time my good friend Marge is going through. I only hope she can find a bit of comfort in this. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..youre a good, kind friend.. you know when to say the something that makes a person feel as tho someone has heard their tears..i feel certain marge felt blessed just by the simple caring youve displayed..good writing hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- wow...thanks so much my friend. it's easy to be a good friend to such special people as you and Marge. i am the one who is blessed to be able to call the two of you my friends. love and hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such thoughtful words you penned a read much enjoyed |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- thanks for reading. glad you enjoyed. this one was truely inspired by the painful memories experienced by a very special person. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ What a blessing you are to this little heart~  Hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Vicky, just a beautiful write for Marge...I miss her lots...the pic didn't come through, but the words just made the mind imagine what it was |
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