Open Poetry #10 |
Romantic Bliss |
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Romantic Bliss A crisp breeze across gentle pond, Hangs sweetly in the air, In the distance two lovers lie, On nightfall's ground. 'Neath midnight sky. The sweetness of their love is found, In every touch, In whispered sound. Each look they cling to, In arms so tight, Beneath full moon, In cherished night. Of hope and dreams, On stars they wish, As these lovers lie, In romantic bliss. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Juls, all the romantics are out and about...well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely images..enjoyed.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes they are Sunshine. . . let Romance reign! This is beautiful Juls. . . just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed this one Juliet The gentleness of romantic bliss you have captured the essence so very well! Coco |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
My, oh my.... What a beautiful poem! Juls, that was a slice of romance well worth devouring. It's getting pretty chilly here these days. You just took me back to a sandy beach, overlooking the moonlit Ottawa river on a hot and starry August night. Thanks. I needed that. Trev. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this one really in "Romantic Bliss"....your title says it Perfectly and it is so nice to see you post one again. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it, and enjoyed it..... this was sooooo romantic...and I love reading it.... Charisma |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Karilea, I'll be the first to admit I'm a hopeless romantic. There simply is no cure for me...lol. Your replys always touch my heart and mean so much. Thank you my friend. Victoria, thanks so so much. Sven, yes let romance reign. Let it rule forever. And it's easy to be beautiful and wonderful when I think of him. Thank you as always my friend. Coco, what a compliment. That means alot. Thanks so much. Trev, you have made my night. The every thought of being able to do that for you brought a big smile to this girls face. And you are so very welcome my friend. Mark, it was nice to post one again. I've been so busy. Gettin ready for my new grandaughter and tons of other stuff. Thank you as always. Charisma, you're too sweet. Thanks so much. Again thank you all, Juls |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
"Each look they cling to, In arms so tight, Beneath full moon, In cherished night." Ahhh, truely is lovers bliss. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Maria that was too precious. Thanks so much. Juls |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Is there anything more romantic than what you have so beautifully written of here Juls? I'm loving this one. Bonnie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Such a desirable and romantic position to be in...James |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Bonnie thanks so much and I tell ya it sure is a romantic scene to me. Takes me back to my youth and tons of sweet memories. James thanks so much for stoppin in. And anyone who's ever experienced this would agree with you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ This touches the romantic in me ! Very softly sung ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marge, I'm glad that side of you was touched. I happen to love all the sides if you though. Juls |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is so softly romantic with great images Melissa~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Melissa, thanks so much for your kind words. Juls |
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