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| Open Poetry #10 |
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I Give My Heart To Thee |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I cannot imagine How my life would be If you were not here To hold and comfort me I was a lonely man Without a hope or prayer Of ever finding true love Until you showed how much you care You give each day a brightness My eyes have never seen The sky is so much more blue And I've never seen the grass so green I can see the brightness of all the stars Without a single look into the sky They flicker and they sparkle Deep within your soft green eyes I try to look back On faded memories But I cannot find them Your face is all I see So, I give to you this promise As you have promised me This love will never waiver I give my heart to thee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ A lovely write from the heart ... which is where all good poetry resides. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jeffrey, so good to see your post! It is lovely, just lovely!! Kathleen |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I can see the brightness of all the stars Without a single look into the sky They flicker and they sparkle Deep within your soft green eyes" What a beautiful confirmation of true love Jeffrey ... you've written with such genuine tenderness from a heart overflowing with love. Wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
This is wonderfull Jeff. It is hard to describe love like this, but you have done a wonderful job of it. Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JC, you make me smile...for many reasons. Thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Jeffrey - Good writing here - you must be blessed with somebody quite special. |
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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
Nicely done |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Jeffrey! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...I think congratulations are in order for someone else too |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Jeffrey, a lovely write and many thanks for this read this evening Coco |
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