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Just for You
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Just for You |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Just for you I felt the need to write a poem A sweet and sentimental roam. Within and out my fantasy With just a tweak of ecstasy. Desire was the needed stock A nip of smile a twinge of mock Some longing from the silent well With just the smallest pinch of hell. I'll stew it in a pot of dream And mix it with a spoon of scheme I'll salt it with exotic spice And layer it with sugared ice. I'd serve it with a mellow wine A cup of word that you are mine And kiss you with a hallowed kiss To chill you with a touch of bliss. I'll whisper you things in hush Just enough to make you blush. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi Seymour ... perfect tempo ... great idea too ... well done |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
This is a wonderful poem. Its funny, but also tells how much you care about that special someone. Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, it's not possible to like poetry and not like this poem....very, very nicely done. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Sy one sip of that wine and you'll make me blush  This was great, enjoyed the read  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am glad that you feel the need to write a poem, and to share it inhere, enjoyed it Charisma |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy...very finely executed... got the tempo thing going well here... and the whole concept, and the style. Just the kind of thing I want to read right now. Thanks for it! Hugs. K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ When I read you - I realize just why I love poetry ! I'm gonna take you at your word - this one's mine ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so beautiful May I have a sip? Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MA Miller, Thanks for the well done. Der Keil, Sweet comment. Balladeer, I'm getting so many very wells from you I'm beginning to believe them. How is the cold? Tracie, Nice to know your blushable. Carisma, Big thanks. Severn, Glad it made you smile. *L* Marge, Didn't you know it was for you? *L* Elizabeth, We'll share the whole bottle. Love Sy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oooohh...you tweak so well! I for one, can still, and do, blush... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
What a great set of promises, so well laid out and composed. I enjoyed every line, as I do with all your poems. Each future line is a mystery that, when revealed, becomes obvious to us all. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Sy, this is great! You are both clever and gifted. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Within and out my fantasy With just a tweak of ecstasy. ======================= Some longing from the silent well With just the smallest pinch of hell. ====================== I'll salt it with exotic spice And layer it with sugared ice. I'd serve it with a mellow wine A cup of word that you are mine ======================= I'll whisper you things in hush Just enough to make you blush. ==================== OH BABY!!! man oh man ... Sy-guy... this is an absolute treasure ... on a morning so gray inside and out- you just made me smile and giggle outloud...TY for that. this is SO COOL and just so YOU ... one of your best ... one of my favs for sure and quite a long list--that is now. poetry in motion..you are later-cooking-with rhyme-gator jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serinity, Love you loving this. Sunshine, Hell I knew you could blush. *L* LngJhnAg, Your a great complimentor, I'll have to keep you around. Sy Fred, You made my day. JM, Oh gal oh gal, you ring my chime. *L* gator aid. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Seymour-A perfect blend of sweet and sassy, I liked very much. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sweet with added humour, lovely Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gemini, Thanks for the sweet and sassy. Maria, Thanks for the read and nice comment. |
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