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Half A Moon For Me
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Half A Moon For Me |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~ Half A Moon For Me ~ Half a moon I see tonight a slice we took today to see the glow, feel the flame the scent of... ocean breeze wrapped around me For a time you stayed we played in oceans tide scarcely light with only a slice the moon hid us well moonbeams melt on satin skin as we blend within Splash my face, a bit of bliss with this salty kiss long for more of loves sweetness share the moon, take all of it ah... you know me well BloomingRose |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely imagery... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deb, isn't it nice to know that there is that one that can really feel us to know us and make it feel so good. Proof that love is really out there. Beautiful write and he is one lucky man or should I say blessed....yes I think that would be it....blessed. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Half a moon I see tonight a slice we took today to see the glow, feel the flame the scent of... ocean breeze wrapped around me For a time you stayed we played in oceans tide scarcely light with only a slice the moon hid us well moonbeams melt on satin skin as we blend within =================== ooohhh I love this pretty sensual poem ... lovely imagery laced within the salty kisses very nice writing here Deb. these are my fav kind of poems this ones going in my library for future swims  jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You know something.....I came back to add this one to my library and I was thinkin........I saw this very same moon last night. And you have captured it PERFECTLY....just wanted you to know. Beautifully written with your equally beautiful heart. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This is so pretty. That magicical moon writes such pretty phrases from your quill. Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
BloomingRose- As with all of your poems, this is beautiful. I loved reading it.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine~ Thank you Mark~ Thank you kind sir  Janet~ Thank you I am glad you enjoyed this one. Mark~ Thanks again Marge~ Thank you Vicky~ Thank you for your kind words |
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