Open Poetry #10 |
To My Love.....DJ |
jc_poet New Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 3 |
If you could feel this love I feel You would know just how much I long for your embrace It's been just two weeks since we planned to meet It's amazing to me how fast we got to this place You vow to bestow your love and let it show And hold me in your arms forever more To be here by my side 'til the day that I die Or until the waves don't reach the shore You're amazing to me how you trust so freely When our eyes have never held each other's gaze The way you make me laugh till all my sorrows pass And stand beside me through all the lonely days So I give to you this love that's so true And promise that it will never die As I step on this plane I sing love's refrain Knowing it will only get better with time |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
jc_poet~ This is absolutely lovely! Such a tender and touching piece. Very good first post, my friend! I look forward to reading more!!! T ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this is really beautiful....can feel the love in your words.. looking forward to see more from you Charisma |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Someone is very lucky to have you! This is a beautiful piece you have written. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
First let me say, welcome to Passions!!!...This is so tender and touching. I wish the two of you all the happiness life has to offer. Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to passions and what a loving way to make an entrance. Will look forward to the progress of your love for one another. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
welcome This is beauiful, and well written Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! What great flow you exhibit. Keep writing! |
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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
Thank you very much babe, I love it I LOVE YOU |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Welcome to the board JC_. I think you will like it here. There was plenty of emotion in your first post. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JC~ WELCOME!! What a sweet way to make an entrance!! Loved this! -SEA |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I thought I'd send our new poster back to the top so everyone got a look at his work |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JC~ beautiful!! welcome to passions...this is a wonderful place. much talent here...and looks like you'll be adding to that list. take care, amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Welcome! Wonderful first post! I love it! Look forward to reading more!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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