Open Poetry #10 |
Lovers Surrender |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Labor of love just doesn’t cut it, Conquest in reality is the lighter we‘ll lit, No sound from souls will continue this beat, Two beings in love will not provide the needed heat, This world of ours we can never cheat, Filling our hearts with its loveless beads, Mask of dreams and fantasies we shed, No longer we decide to be fully clad, Shame upon shame we are bathed in, As the world inches closer making us its kin. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WOW! What a philosophy...very well written! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This almost had a rap beat to it! Kathleen |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank you very much people. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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