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Silence of Our Love-----3000th post!!!!!!
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Silence of Our Love-----3000th post!!!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Silence of Our Love  Before the end upcoming, in which the moments shall forever twist into what we cater as eternal whithering; as one will rest in the arms of friends and the depths of lovers, in this dwelling of youth, upon the face of earth. Kissing the once inspiration of two souls in their determined struggle to find the peace of eventual happenings in the sunrise of tomorrow All seems to be as it never would have been dealt without dedication As in our never ending love, as it guides us to the everlasting truth in love within our hearts; with the patience residing in the recesses, claiming never to have been tainted; giving us pleasure of trust Happiness forever urging us forward; guiding us to the peaceful silence of our love. Mark Bohannan  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
/pip/Forum3/HTML/000590.html RODEO in Announcements LOL |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Congrats on the 3000th! Truly sad, but beautifully written! You are an amazing writer! I enjoyed it a lot! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"Butterfly Kisses and Angelwing Hugs"....its beautiful Mark..... GE |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* As I have said before and will say again...you are an amazing poet. This is merely another example of what you can write when you dive to the depths of heart and soul. You created a work of art in this piece...and ya so I'm a little biased but that comes with friendship...and in this case doesn't play into my opinion at all. Congratulation on your 3000th...tis a beauty! **Angel Wing Hugs and Butterfly Kisses** To you my sweet poetic friend~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, CONGRATSSSS on your 3000th! And you arrived here with grace and beauty. This poem shows, as well as your many others, what an incredable talent you have. You are an amazing writer! ~warm hugs~ ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
"As in our never ending love, as it guides us to the everlasting truth in love within our hearts; with the patience residing in the recesses, claiming never to have been tainted; giving us pleasure of trust" This really talked to me and gives me a little hope in that in which lies away from me....this was very nice....I liked the different style you used here with this!! Congrats on 3000!!! Way to go!! Take Care, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
MC... what a perfect and grand way to mark your milestone post ... a BEAUTIFUL Acrostic with a tender heart touching message ... love the *Kissing* *AND* *Angelwing* verses and of course the last two lines ... perfect babes ...and if ya keep this up... everyone is gonna know... YOUR A POET...  Shhhhh...your secrets safe with me... wouldnt wanna spoil that cool cowboy image  later-awesome-poet-gator me loves ya me |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mark, it gets no better than this...a wonderful acrostic, a beautiful poem and a worthy milestone. Congrats on all three!!! It's a pleasure to know you... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
CONGRATULATIONS, Mark! Yeaaaaaaaaaa! And you celebrated with a beautiful poem to boot. It doesn't get any better than this 'til your next one, of course  "Cuz just when I think you've outdone yourself You make a liar out of me! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Congratulations, my sweet friend Mark....and many thanks for all your poetry and your many thoughtful and caring replies...and by the way...this poem is awesome! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is truly exquiste m'friend...I understand the longing and heartache all too well...just stunning...congratulations, angelheart---ya just keep rockin' the forum! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Mark, you know I love your writing...what amazing talent you have! Congrats on your 3000th! I have a long way to go for that |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Mark a creative and inspiring 3000...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
T his poem is the H eight of beauty I t is S uperb I t is S ooo G loriously, R ichly deserving praise,it is E xtraordinaryly A mazingly T ruly awesome I really love this, utterly beautiful. I've said it before and it's true you have so much talent that it's a joy to read your work. Take care my friend Marsha  [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What an incredibly beautiful acrostic to mark this milestone ... exceptional Mark! The flow in this free verse is just lovely, and the sentiment contained within ... superb! Congratulations on your 3,000th post, and many thanks to you for your beautiful poetry and caring responses to so many. I am grateful to be included in that grouping. Best wishes and congratulations, /Kit |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Wow, 3000 post, are you going to let me up to you some day. Keep up the good work. I am back in Passions. see new post. Your loving sister Cathy Cathy Marie Bohannan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Congrats with your 3000 posts... that seems miles away for me.... I can't do more than to agree with all the others that enjoyed your beautiful poem. it's amazing how you created so much beauty with simple words. love your work Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, your artistry is flittering about on these beautiful butterfly wings, and I certainly hope you use your time and talent in the near future to delight us all with another acrostic... this is very, very well done my friend... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ Congratulations on hitting 3000!!! This is yet another to make me *SIGH*...... Just Wonderful -SEA |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
congratulations and silent WOW's from me...i only tried on acrostic and finally scrapped it without posting....this is incredibly well done and beautiful |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
***sigh*** A beautiful display of your poets charm for your 3000th post. Congratulations!!! |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Mark - you have truly created a masterpiece. Your work is always so very beautiful, romantic and full of your heart. Everyone here loves you and can't wait until you post again and again and again. Keep it up! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Jan-You throw one heck of a rodeo me friend. Thank you. snowpants-Thank you and the sadness is only due to having to wait but the happiness is overwhelming in it's promise. Greeneyes-Thank you so very much. Holly-You know how much it means to me to see your name here my friend....and yes it does flow from the heart as confusing as it may be sometimes. Thank you so much. rosepetals25-First off thank you for the warm hugs and also for your kindness always. Bridgette-There is always hope....so never give up in that. Thank you. JM-What image are ya talking about...where....huh?? Thank you for all you are my sweet friend. Balladeer-And the pleasure of knowing you is all mine and one that keeps me here at Passions....thank you my friend. chansondegeste-Ahhhh never a liar...just mislead is all.LOL...Thank you my dear. Martie-Tis I that thank you for putting up so many exquisite poems to reply to. Hugs to you me friend. serenity-My friend....do you know how much it means to me to know that you know. Thank you dearly passing shadows-As I love yours. You will make it there....just watch. Thank you again for your kind replies always. James-Thank you...nice to see you back with us. Marsha-Thank you and also thank you for the acrostic you left. Kit-I am glad to have you in that group as well. Thank you for always sticking around. Cathy-You can catch up if you are willing to go without sleep.LOLOL...love ya my sis...thanks for you. Charisma-Well just last week it seemed miles from me as well. Amazing how much ground can be covered in such short time when you are having fun. Thank you and I am happy to see you with us as a new and brilliant talent. Karilea-Thank you and I will try to get another up soon. This was my first and sort of spur of the moment. SEA-I love making you sigh...did you know that..lol...hey where is Justien??? Thank you much. jinxed-Ahhhh never scrap anything that you write...you never know when you will need it. Thanks for stopping by. Tears_of_Grace-Ahhhh another sigh....music to my ears.....thank you and I might add that I do so enjoy your works as well. They have a way of reaching out. Susan-WOW...it is so nice to see you again. I love everyone here as well. Thank you for that amazing reply....hugs to you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, someone's been busy, 3000 posts congratulations!! This is lovely, and butterflies won't be around for long in these parts. Kathleen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, I had to come back, I forgot to congratulate you on 3000 posts. (I know head like a sieve) And what a beautiful work of art this is, well done, Can't improve on perfection they say but I bet you will. Take care Marsha |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
congrads well done and this is a lovely way to celebrate Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Butterfly kisses are what one misses if we are not careful, and let life pass by. Very sweet poem. Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000!!! This is just beautiful. Wonderful acrostic. I love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~ Mark ~~ I just wanted to add my hearty congratulations to those above me, and give you a little something for your collection! Keep writing and stay happy, my friend!! (I cannot get my little gift to load here, so I will send it to you via email.) Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Irish Rose-Ahhh but you see the butterflies will ALWAYS return to you. Thank you so much Marsha-Welcome back .... now this perfection thing...don't ya think ya are puttin a little preasure on this here ole cowboy??? Thank you as always me dear. Maria-And lovlier with your presence. Thank you so very much. Deb-I shall always grasp on to what I hold dear in life and stive to make it my reality no matter what time may pass on in my journey. Thank you so very much my dear friend. Vicky-Thank you and that means the world to me being my first one ya know. Sunny-Your presence here along with your own celebration make this even more special to me...thank you so very much. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I am so sorry for being late with my response my friend. Please let me say ........ CONGRADULATIONS!!!! I do so love to read your poetry my friend and have I told you how glad I am that you came to Passions??? I am......... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
F E L I C I T A T I O N S on your 3000'th May I say just these lil words I do so much adore reading your work! Coco |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I think this is the best acrostic I've seen, wonderful work, Mark! Corinne |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Beyond beautiful surpassing serene, perfectly poignant. Just what I expected from you. Congratulations on your 3,000th. Sandi |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Well Mark...there isn't too much more one can say when all above have already done so...congratulations on the 3000 mark.. your poem was just lovely... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ What a beautiful acrostic CONGRATULATIONS on your 3000th post...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marina-You are not late my friend and do you know what? I too am glad I came to Passions because of friends and poets such as you. Thank you and now I believe it is time to open up that bottle of champaigne, don't you? CocoBaci-Yes you may and may I say....I adore you and your sweet nature? Thank you. Corinne-Why thank you and I truely am humbled by your words especially since this is my first attempt. Sandi-Your praise has made me grin from ear to ear and I do so thank you for that. Maureen-Just your smile alone is always enough. Thank you so much. Traci-Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Your talents know no bounds, belated congratulations on your milestone. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ The round-up continues ... glad to be part of the herd. A lovely write that comes from your heart and reaches others. Love you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
EagleOne-Thank you so much and you are not late at all. Marge-my sweet friend...you will NEVER just be part of the herd. You my friend will ride saddle to saddle with me forever. Thank you so much for all you do. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Loved this |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
vandana-why thank you my friend. So glad you enjoyed it. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Very cool, Mark. cONGRATS! are you know offically in the hall of fame? Best wishes. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Very cool, Mark. CONGRATS! are you know offically in the hall of fame? Best wishes. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
WOW what a fantastic way to celebrate. Congrats on 3000 and an amazing poem, again. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Mark, Congratulations on this one! You are a wonderful asseet to Passions. Your faithfulness, replies and outstanding imagery and visual effects in your poetry make it a pleasure to read anything you post and I really mean that! You are courteous and polite and just down right western! Congratulations! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Mark-Congrats on 3000 and yet another wonderful touching piece. May you have many more. Very nice work. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
What a way to celebrate 3000! Love deserves to be praised by such a talented poet. Congrats! Much love all, Krissie |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Congratulations my friend...You have made this milestone a treasure and memory...This was truly beautiful!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What better verse to celebrate the big 3000 than a beautiful acrostic, made to look easy, that flows like a mountain brook. A toast to you my friend, and to the next 3000 and to your wonderful talent which has graced this forum, and for all the beautiful comments to the poets from your kind heart. A toast and a kiss From a poet friend Liz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Even though you're almost at 4000 now this one will never loose it's beauty my friend...beautiful and timeless~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Mark absolutely beautiful poem, congrads on the 3000th post. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N SON  3 0 0 0 !Bob <>< |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sorry I'm so late to reply, I don't get out much. Bob <>< [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
COWBOY MARK..... look at me doing a shameless late trot into this pasture, this grassy meadow of sensational marvellous poetry.... sorry that I couldn't be here earlier, but you know the work problems that I am going thru... my friend... I am so glad that I could be a part of this poem, your 3 th post and what a most lovely poem this one is....My regards, Sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow...this was a beautiful acrostic, Mark. What can one say when all have said it before me. *S ~Wynter Bliss ** OH I meant to say I loved the title, guess I did find something to say < !signature-->"The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, Memorable, melodic and marvellous. I loved the acrostic, you can't beat butterfly kisses and angelwing hugs. Congratulations on the 3,000th post. Here's to the next 3,000 Cheers Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ron-Thank you my friend and I do believe that we all are in the archives. Dee-Thank you so much and I do so appreciate you and your wonderful sincerity. Kathleen-Well my friend, it is always such a pleasure to see you on one of my post and even more so to read one of yours. I admire your sincerity and heart as well and I do hope you know that. Yes, I do believe you do. Hugs to you my sweet Irish Lass from this grateful Irishman. Gemini-Thank you so much and I do hope to not only pen more but to read many many more and hopefully yours will always be there as well. AniKay83-Wow...thank you dearly and I believe love deserves to be celebrated by ALL poets. Cherie- I could never tell you how happy to see your name in the forums again. Thank you my dear friend. Liz-Why thank you. Your replies are almost as lovely as your poems with the beautiful images they leave. Hugs to you my sweet friend. Holly-Timeless is the beauty and the love and the heart of the butterfly that this was written for. Any guesses LOL...Thank you my Sweet friend. Your ever inspiring ways will always give my muse a workout. Brian-Thank you kind sir, I am glad you liked it. Bob-Well, hello there sir. Nice to see you in the open forums and I know how time is of late and I do appreciate your stopping by. Thank you for the reply and the wonderful graphic. God bless you my friend and I will see you in SJ later. Promise. Sudhir-Ahhhhhh my man, how are you? Yes, I do know how work is right now and I do hope that they give you a break soon. Thank you kind sir and good buddie, I do appreciate you. I will buy you an ale as soon as you have the time to sit for a few LOL Wynter Bliss-Thank you so very much and what you have said is perfect. Even just a smile from you would mean the world to me. Kethry-No you can't can you? Especially when they are from as beautifully hearted a butterfly as the one this one was for. Thank you much. |
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