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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-10-04 09:09 PM


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~Child~

the child lives forever in the eternal night
screaming and weeping and bleeding in flight
the child will hold forever in our hearts
crying and dying, as we tear our selves apart
cut me
stitch me
kill me
ditch me
forever in flight
death in night
hold me too tight
without a right
far away floating
not even knowing
true pain showing
not often glowing
cut me
stitch me
kill me
ditch me
all for the child
of an unborn womb
never born
but dead so soon...

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
1 posted 2000-10-04 09:22 PM


hun
*hugs*  this is so sad.  i am here for you always hun.  this brought me to tears.  lots of tears.  i hope thiss reply made you smile abit.  for you always make me smile,  *hugs and kisses*  
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-10-04 10:10 PM


Nik~
the pure honesty of this is breathtaking. tears streak my face as i write this response. im sorry that you have experienced this kind of pain. and it's obvious you have...due to the heartfelt emotion of this.
*hugs*
take care,
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-10-04 10:15 PM


Nik...baby girl you are in my heart...always and forever...I love you
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
4 posted 2000-10-04 11:37 PM


Oh, this poem tears my heart out.  It rings with such terrible pain, it must be true.  I'm so very, very sorry.  My prayers are with you.




The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.


notlikely2
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 308
UK
5 posted 2000-10-05 06:00 AM


Nikolette
I know how this feels.
I too have felt sucj pain.
But you will smile again.
One day.
Tell me when you do?

Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2000-10-05 05:40 PM



Nikolette-
wow...so incredibly sad.  my heart
goes out to you, and i will keep
you in my prayers.
My best to you.

-vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-10-05 05:48 PM


"crying and dying"...these words say so much..a time of sadness and sorrow...James
Nikolette Sadness
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8 posted 2000-10-05 09:16 PM


thank you all for your replies...i guess i needed them...

my heart is bleeding...

Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

9 posted 2000-10-05 09:35 PM


My God.  This is powerful.  I lost a daughter many years ago, not my choice, but the pain of it.  Heartfelt words.

Kathleen


Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

10 posted 2000-10-05 09:35 PM


My God.  This is powerful.  I lost a daughter many years ago, not my choice, but the pain of it.  Heartfelt words.

Kathleen


Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

11 posted 2000-10-05 09:35 PM


My God.  This is powerful.  I lost a daughter many years ago, not my choice, but the pain of it.  Heartfelt words. < !signature-->
(Oh, I'm so sorry, I triple posted, maybe one of the moderators can take 2 off!)
Kathleen



[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-05-2000).]

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