Open Poetry #10 |
Child |
Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
unedited ~Child~ the child lives forever in the eternal night screaming and weeping and bleeding in flight the child will hold forever in our hearts crying and dying, as we tear our selves apart cut me stitch me kill me ditch me forever in flight death in night hold me too tight without a right far away floating not even knowing true pain showing not often glowing cut me stitch me kill me ditch me all for the child of an unborn womb never born but dead so soon... Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *hugs* this is so sad. i am here for you always hun. this brought me to tears. lots of tears. i hope thiss reply made you smile abit. for you always make me smile, *hugs and kisses* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Nik~ the pure honesty of this is breathtaking. tears streak my face as i write this response. im sorry that you have experienced this kind of pain. and it's obvious you have...due to the heartfelt emotion of this. *hugs* take care, amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nik...baby girl you are in my heart...always and forever...I love you |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, this poem tears my heart out. It rings with such terrible pain, it must be true. I'm so very, very sorry. My prayers are with you. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Nikolette I know how this feels. I too have felt sucj pain. But you will smile again. One day. Tell me when you do? Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nikolette- wow...so incredibly sad. my heart goes out to you, and i will keep you in my prayers. My best to you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"crying and dying"...these words say so much..a time of sadness and sorrow...James |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thank you all for your replies...i guess i needed them... my heart is bleeding... Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
My God. This is powerful. I lost a daughter many years ago, not my choice, but the pain of it. Heartfelt words. Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
My God. This is powerful. I lost a daughter many years ago, not my choice, but the pain of it. Heartfelt words. Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
My God. This is powerful. I lost a daughter many years ago, not my choice, but the pain of it. Heartfelt words. < !signature--> (Oh, I'm so sorry, I triple posted, maybe one of the moderators can take 2 off!) Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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