Open Poetry #10 |
Relinquished Pain |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
*~Relinquished Pain~* < !signature-->Amy M. Kennedy-- For several years I held the pain within Always afraid of showing the real true me During all that time I carried the price of sin Not mine, but another's...but I just couldn't see But Karma stepped in making everything change You came into my life from heaven above And finally I was free, no longer in chains My wonderful angel how I cherish our love The past once held me and captured my soul Darkness once secretly ruled my heart Then with a ray of light, you made me feel whole And now our future is a brand new start The bars that once held me...hold me no longer Your love was the key to the release of my pain Now I'm finally able to mend...feeling much stronger You freed me...whence into my life you came The light of our love, makes the dark dissapear And the darkness a thing of the past It is my sincerest wish for you to come here And for our love to always and forever...last "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Amy....true love will do that |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very beautiful poem to read, thank you! |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
True love is the potion that will take away so much pain. Beautiful. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ain't love grand! Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am glad that you found your love. release your pain and let the love overwin. Im happy for you, and loved to read your poem. *hug* Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh the wonders of true love. Tis nice is it not? Wonderful verse and much happiness from you in this one. Loved it. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The bars that once held me...hold me no longer Your love was the key to the release of my pain Now I'm finally able to mend...feeling much stronger You freed me...whence into my life you came" Wonderful sentiments Amy! True love is an amazing gift of freedom ... beautifully expressed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Love can break through the walls my friend. . . Superb. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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