Open Poetry #10 |
Shades Of |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Shades Of In candlelit crystal, she cries a rainbow of brilliant colors, setting them free. An irridescent veil comes over her, as shapes gather to touch edges. Eyes unaware, she reaches for the heart etching it with words unspoken. In this soft glow she lip paints memories created under last evenings diamond light... and steals your gray away. In the shadows, playing are the memories of a lasting touch the first time lips tasted lips. Waiting, once again are the hues of her rainbow to shower you in colors true. The gray shall disappear as the early morning fog lifts to the warmth of a new shine... painting over your shades of gray. M/M 10 *2k |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Painting over your shades of gray' That was beautiful! I liked it a lot!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
An irridescent veil comes over her, as shapes gather to touch edges. Eyes unaware, she reaches for the heart etching it with words unspoken. WOW!! beautiful beautiful beautiful!! The stanza I picked out was my favorite but this whole thing was just stunning! take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
snowpants..thank you for enjoying my words today Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
amy ...thank you for the triple beautifuls... and for enjoying the poem ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
I have always had a special connection with shades of grey,this poem has described it for me perfectly,thankyou. "and steals your gray away." this poem took my breath away. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
fool thank you for reading "not a" fool Maureen |
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