A few Haikus....(the Haiku challenge)

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Open Poetry #10

A few Haikus....(the Haiku challenge)

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

0 posted 2000-10-04 03:23 PM

*this is in response to a challenge which you can check out in the Poetry Challenge forum. enjoy*

*relax*
hammocks sway iced tea
Bradley tickles his guitar
barefoot grass light rain

*pressure*
yes, no, maybe so...
decide; take the ride; jump, fly,
or stay. choose your worth.

*not forgotten*
as I look out the
bus window, the past i left
fades into focus

*atone*
a dim light in view
face the demons, bear the cross
forgiveness awaits

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-10-04 04:06 PM

Oh Ethan...these are wonderful...I adore Relax

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-10-04 04:07 PM

bout time babes

hey you..these are way cool...
love the last two... the 3rd one is my fave..
its so YOU ... which is always a good thing.
if ya havent already check your email .. sent ya note.
later-cool-Haiku-gator
me

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2000-10-04 04:13 PM

nice

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-10-04 07:13 PM

Ethan-These are great my friend. I particulary like "pressure"....has alot of meaning in it for me. Brought you a present.
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Excellent challenge my friend!!!!!!!

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

5 posted 2000-10-04 07:50 PM

ethan~
these are really cool. i like haikus. only wish i could write them. beautiful work you have here.
take care.
amy

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

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