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Romantic Warrior |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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a new day dawns or so it seems was he real? the man of her dreams? or did he exist only in her mind? yes, he must true love she'd not find and so she woke to battle again they would win the question was "when?" But in her dreams, she battled not alone His strength he gave her, true love he'd shown And with the sword of his passion and the shield of his heart He swore loyalty to her, his queen and pledged he would ne'er part He stood beside her in his armour so bright Dispeling the demons with the rays of love's light He guarded her dreams while she slept this Knight of love so bold Protecting her from the nightmares that would have made her heart so cold And when dawn would come, she would ask his name "Romantic Warrior" was all he would say And then in a flash of blue light and the blink of an eye This warrior would go again to his home in the sky a new day dawns or so it seems was he real? the man of her dreams? he didn't exist only in her mind next to her true love she did find and so they woke to battle again they would win the question was "when?" "soon my love soon" he would always say with his love she'd face any day he was her Knight Warrior of love true angel sent from up above --------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Sven this is so beautiful. Every womans dream, a romantic warrior. Big sighs. Juls |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sir Sven, what a charminge and delightfulle tribute to love. I doff my hat to you. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful dream it is! Only a sweet, sensitive and romantic man like you could pen such beauty! I think many of us women have a "romantic warrior" that we long to find, but find only in dreams Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Wonderful tale you have told. This is awesome writing my friend!! They say, there is someone out there for everyone. I see you have learned a few new tricks here . . . very nice. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, thy armour rings throughout the knell and horse's step doth foretell my Knight, thee have come back to me true love shall reign in storybooks well. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An interesting idea this romantic warrior...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Juls. . . every woman's dream? Well, ok if you say so. . . thank you my friend. . . Kethry. . . I accepteth your hat and say that it doth fit quite well! Melissa. . . you're making me blush over here. . .  . . . thank you my friend. . .Lone Wolf. . . what tricks? I haven't learned any New tricks. . . I have no idea what you're talking about. . . Thank you though! Sunshine. . . indeed my friend. . . and forever shall their tales be told to lovers young and old. . .  James. . . thank you. . . glad that you like the idea! ----------------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Sir Sven, You have inspired me. I have in mind my own version of a romantic warrior, thanks to you. He will be coming soon to these boards. Thank you Sir Sven......well done TLS |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I liked this one, I think most times that TIME is the only deciding factor in whether someone is real. It was written quite well. Kathleen |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
ahhhhhhh! (deep sigh) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lonely Stranger. . . thank you sir! I look forward to seeing your vision of the "Romantic Warrior". . . mine will also make appearances from time to time. . . Irish Rose. . .you're right. . . time is the only barrier. . . thank you seraphin. . . took your breath away did I? LOL Thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh big TICK....you've done it again this piece so romantic and beautiful...lovely written piece Sven my friendTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven... My day is not complete without a reading from your truly romantic heart! This is a beautifully written love song..... May you write....forevermore.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
I so love stories of knights! This one was simply beautiful. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
tracie, thank you again! Glad that you enjoyed. . .Suuny1, I am indeed humbled by your words. . . thank you so much. . . and I hope that I can fulfill your wish. . . Abra, we have one thing in common then! Thank you my friend. . . oh how I wish that I lived in those days still. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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