Open Poetry #10 |
She Sleeps |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She Sleeps She sleeps, and dreams of dreams midst angel’s wings hears the songs the angels sing she feels the breath of love’s lost call she is lifted up she will not fall she is not lost in this reverie but lo she’s found absolute majesty and she would gaze ‘pon his face and be taken up in his embrace lo in this, the dream of dreams she is clothed as if a queen and beside her midst angel’s wings stands the man of which angels sing in silent repose she shifts in sleep a voice fulfills all desires deep 4 October 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Karilea~ *clapping*~ this is astounding sweetie. simply breathtaking i must say. i love the style of writing and the format. excellent piece! take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Wow~...This is beautiful, Sunshine! Thoroughly enjoyed ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dreamy poem, Karilea! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-Truely a lovely piece, I had to read it twice and liked. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, this is another of your shining gems, applause, bravo's and bouquets. All in abundance. Take care Marsha |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all very much...this was a pleasant little piece to pen... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The dreams that we dream my friend. . . This was wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you've been peaking into my sleeptime again, eh, karilea? WOWOW!! loved this! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Lovely! Just lovely! Delicately worded and beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, Doreen, Rosemary...thank you all... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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