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That Way, Supposedly... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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That Way, Supposedly If it is going to be that way the way of my heart as emotions are tugged and strained even though phrases remain loud in my head alone in bed of how it was supposed to be you and me now lost in time seasons won’t be complete lost all reason and rhyme somehow we walked out of the clime that was to have kept us close and secure we thought it would endure that way it was supposed to the closeness is gone and we were probably wrong from the beginning but wrapped it in cheer and grinning we smiled through the days and anguished through the nights and I suppose it’ll be all right if it’s supposed to be that way. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 30 September, 2000 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Awwww.....this is touching...and sad....but beautiful too.  -SEA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I try to live one day at a time and accept that which is 'supposed to be'. But it isn't always easy, and this poem says it the best! Great writing here, lil' sis!< !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, so nice of you to read this...thank you... Sunny1, you would know, wouldn't you? Thank you dear... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
sunshine, I have to agree with SEA. So sad yet soo beautiful. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - This poem is very poignant and regretful. I sincerely hope you aren't going through this. On a more personal side.... I've read this poem several times now, and I still can't find anything in there about maybe keeping a rascally pirate on the side *eyebrows wigglin'* Have I missed something, or is this poem incomplete? *puzzled expectant expression* |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Sunshine...this is sad, yet so beautifully written. It is so hard when we think something is supposed to be one way and it turns out that we were wrong. I'm learning more and more everyday that we should just be thankful that we were able to love and learn from what happened. I've been away for several weeks and have missed everyones beautifully written poetry. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Sometimes things dont work out the way we think they are supposed to. Great poem. I hope that sometime you find that for which you seek. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Time given chance and chance given time allows all the answers to your little rhyme Tomorrows of now rest in verses little dance as chance given time and time given chance Hey ..... makes sense to me....but so does kissing a butterfly and roping tornados at the same time.LOL |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I won't say it is sad cause that much is given. I will say it has painted a vivid memory that I had thought I lost forever. Believe it or not but I am grateful that you have written this wonderful tribute to it, even if it wasn't my memory you had in mind. Thank you. It is very beautifully written(yes I know this is a gramatical error but it says it nicely). have a wonderful week knowing you have touched my heart ever so tenderly, in a way that has me remembering my hope. Thanks again.The White Wolf |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow, you folks sure know how to keep the Sun Shining...these comments are really making me soar...thank you! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, my friend. . . this is the hardest lesson to learn. . . Beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sven... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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