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Run Like The Wind My Friend
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Run Like The Wind My Friend |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Run Like The Wind My Friend~ My Friend run! run like the wind as we bask in this place of warm daystar light look unto the hills for your place with me  A new song we'll sing the song of freedom life with no threats no guns or wars to kill the flesh Run with me to gather flowers pick new colors for me one's I've not seen lay with me on pillows of petals dream with me for a while See clouds drift in soft hues of blue write our names in heavenly skies stay with me in this expanse of space kiss my cheek, feel my heartbeat no words I'll speak... I'll pick blue flowers for you a symbol, no fear of this unknown place no reason to be shy, here we'll never die with boldness you'll share this dream too So run with me my friend... BloomingRose |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~BR i liked this one a lot! very refreshing to read something positive and uplifting. you write with such beauty. thanks so much for sharing your gift. take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Amy, Thank you kindly. Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deb-I read this one this morning but didn't have time to reply then. I have thought about these images today and the blue skies, the new colors of flowers, and jsut plain running like the wind.....especially the running like the wind...my all time dream I think. This is one truely lovely verse and so filled with promise and hope and visions of the perfect neverending day. Who wouldn't want to be your friend with all of this. Beautiful and sorry if I rambled on ... but I know that you will forgive me. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Needs one more time through |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Run with me to gather flowers pick new colors for me one's I've not seen lay with me on pillows of petals dream with me for a while See clouds drift in soft hues of blue write our names in heavenly skies stay with me in this expanse of space kiss my cheek, feel my heartbeat no words I'll speak... ================= Deb this is SO lovely.... Im so glad Mark sent this back up so I didnt miss it.... theses forums are so busy... anyway.. your imagery here is wonderful as are the expressions of hope and faith for a more peaceful place to live and play. has a calming sereness about it.. thank you for that take care jm |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deb, this is wonderful...always as a young child I wanted to run like a horse IN the wind...you've brought back to me lovely childhood memories today, and I thank you for that... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ Of course to run like the wind is my friend too. Glad you enjoyed. JM~ Glad you see the serene picture I tried to paint... after all that running. Sunshine~ To recall youth and running carefree, is a memory I cherish too. Glad you liked. Thank you all for reading. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Deb this is truly truly beautiful. I'm just in awe. Juls |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Juls~ thank you so much... |
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