Open Poetry #10 |
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The Slang Of Life |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
The Slang Of Life The silent sea dissolves the stones Interns my questions with my bones. Then washes life upon the shore To raise the question here once more. All life speaks in a koine slang. From common plasma where it sprang. All breath that lives within its cast Cries constant echoes from its past. I've watched it on a shorter plane Begin and end, begin again. The permanence is touch and go And that is all I really know. All beginnings intern an end In this I feel there is a bend. A sign that shouts vicinity That points to me infinity. But who am I this rhizopod To measure what we all call God. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ very cool ponderings... ![]() Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The silent sea dissolves the stones Interns my questions with my bones. Then washes life upon the shore To raise the question here once more. =================== if you get any cooler... were gonna have to defrost ya babes ![]() I need to find out what you eat for breakfast ... where do ya get these awesome ponderings from later-freezer-pop-gator me |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Wow! Sey, what a piece of work! Love those last two lines. Great job! ![]() --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thanks for the Cool Seas. JM, Love you back gator. Tennesse, Thanks for the great and WOW. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"I've watched it on a shorter plane Begin and end, begin again. The permanence is touch and go And that is all I really know." well... that's a lot to know. yep. thanks, Sy. ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"All beginnings intern an end In this I feel there is a bend. A sign that shouts vicinity That points to me infinity." Excellent Seymour! Very thought-provoking ... I love to ponder these types of sentiments, and the flow in this was superb. I really enjoyed this piece! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, I don't know if this really helps, but take comfort in that we all have the same problem. *L* Kit, You picked out the key thought. Very good and thank you. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'A sign that shouts vicinity That points to me infinity. But who am I this rhizopod To measure what we all call God.' What a wonderful little pondering piece of word art from your magic pen. I like the thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You say the nicest things. *L* Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Once again, my friend, reading you has sparked a flicker of inspiration...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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