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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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intoxicated conversation floats aimlessly in the air bold and brazen you speak your words clever and philisophical opinionated slurs of some old family values morals skewed conversation tires only in your eyes-- as the fire in your head wakes again visible now are the truths in your soul no secrets witheld they fill the space between you and me occassionally pitching knives at faceless names hopelessly, you claim your spotlight pickled in the moment... speak to the moon, my friend; even when i close my eyes i hear you your honesty intoxicates my soul... -dgvarner theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well, as I read this I had a totally different view of what was happening! I guess the word intoxicated made me think of someone who was drinking. A very good poem! Made me think.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep! Exactly what I was thinking! Didn't think about the "drunk" part at all..."conversation" was the key to me...what can I say...wish I had written it. This is truth from the core. jwesley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- you KNOW i love this.  glad you posted it.  love and hugs, -tricks P.S. I especially like the big words...lol. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee this is another of your awesome poems, how well you write them. So stand up straight and take your bows, and if you get tired from the repeated encores don't blame me! As if!!! Speak to you soon Bubbles  |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
yep me too...the ending pulled it together in a different way than i expected, great write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, I like this...nicely original, "pickled in the moment"...great descriptive poetry! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
POET..glad i could get your noodle on the think JWESLEY..thank you for such a kind reply TRICKS..so glad i could offer you a few big words LOL  MARSHA..as always..thank you kindly  *this is me bowing and taking it...* lolJINXED..the ending actually is different from the beginning..  but as intended, i'm glad it pulled it all together for you MARTIE..happy you stopped in to read me..glad you enjoyed hugs, dg< !signature--> theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, this is very fresh. It must have been some good conversation. I really love the way you write. Hope your keeping a straight face...  Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER...thank you..coming from the poet of romance, that means a lot! whats this straight face thing?? LOL hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
oh, just a teasing joke from that other poem.... hiding under the skirt.... Parker |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dee - This flows wonderfully along, pushing me first this way, and then that. I read it twice to catch the flow. I must warn you, though. When you post in here, DON'T WEAR SKIRTS! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
parker..keeping a straight face is not my specialty...  lngjhn..so glad you enjoyed this one.. yeah, i'm learning about those skirts.... lolhugs, dg "Don't MAKE Me come down there." God |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved it also, and I have to tell you keep your skirt on!! There are a lot of passionate men in this forum!!!< !signature--> Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Dg, BRAVO! Too many compliments to shed, and I haven't any way to put them into words. More! More! ~ Beth |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
What wrong with skirts????? You can hide all kinds of things under them, especially me... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"even when I close my eyes I can hear you". Amazing portrayal of your admiration...I too look around me for someone to appreciate and admire...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
IRISH..most happy for you to love this and..i'm learning about these passions men... LOLELIZABETH..many thanks for your enthusiastic words! glad you liked PARKER..are you up my skirt AGAIN!!?? JMLEE..so glad you stopped in to read me..i'm glad you liked thank you for all your replies! hugs, dg < !signature--> "Don't MAKE Me come down there." God [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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