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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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living in the past, i dream of the future- void of a present reality -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..sounds like me... its so easy to live in the past..where things are certain, less feared..but we gotta get our butts out of the past dont we.. one day..our futures will arrive tricks.. hugs,dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This says so much. I know I have a habit of that too, living in the past instead of looking at the now. A saying so true, if we stand with one foot in yesterday, and one in tomorrow, we're (peeing) all over today. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- lol...sounds like me too.  seems likei've been doing alot of this lately. sometimes the past just seems like a safe and sure place to be. but, yep...someday we will both have a future...or two...lol. thanks for reading. hugs to you. WhtDove- thank you so much for your loyal responses. they really mean alot to me. i appreciate you. glad you liked this. love you both, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
No place to be my friend. Care to fill it up with the sweetness of a cowboy's friendly heart of caring? So few words but oh so many things said and felt in this one. Hugs baby. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such sad thoughts Vicky...my hope is that you find the sunshine in your future...reach out...hold tight...and never let go of the sunshine there~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is true, the present is void if you are living in the past. But it can surely happen Great little poem Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much said in so few well chosen and spoken words ... yes...I can relate to the comfort of the past and to the spaces in between then and what lies ahead. well done Vicky take care jm |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Few words but well done! It could be me you have descibed here. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
short and all too insightful, like that Ezra Pound one...i forget the title. something...Metro..."A station of the Metro"? i dunno, and i like that one a lot too... but that's also why i love this lovely concoction of your here. it is how so many of us live, myself included. i always tell people to live in the moment, and i believe the key is too be mindful of the future, but always keep focus and good judgement here in the present. i wish i listened to myself a little more. AWESOME. it's in my library. I was thinking of the immortal words of Socrates who said,"I drank what?" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVicky~ Ahhhhh ! You've got the right formula ... Mix it up with the past and the dreams ... they're usually more fun than reality ! *Hugs* - my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- oh you sweet cowboy... don't worry...that void is already being filled with exactly that. thank you so much, sweet friend. warm hugs to you. Holly- thank you so much, my friend. i really hope you know how much your kind words mean to me...i truly cherish your replies. big hugs. Liz- yes...it can be a sad truth. thank you for the kind words. glad you enjoyed. Janet Marie- yes...there is definitely a certain comfort in the past... thank you so much, my friend. your kind words really mean alot to me...so glad you like this. big hugs EagleOne- i think most of us, at one time or another, have been able to relate to this. so glad you enjoyed. Ethan- wow...i am truly flattered to have this one be a part of your library. sounds like good advice that you are giving your friends. you know what they say...'you teach best, what you most need to learn' how true it is. really glad you like this. Marge- you are so special!! i believe you could find something positive in any situation. i love you for that. thank you for the smiles. (((((huge hugs))))) thanks again all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
just a thought?..that was an awesome reflection! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
deep deep true thinker you are |
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