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A Woman's Dream
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A Woman's Dream |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~A Woman's Dream~ A slice of moon I saw tonight peeking through night skys winking at the sight of me I walk alone in my garden of dreams autumn air blowing my hair touch my face with your bold wind embrace kiss my lips with evening dew Wish it were really you take me to your dreams if you dare... Show me love in this cool night air my dreams of you... quiet as these night skys a breeze touches my thigh Down I look to see your face touch your lips with my tender kiss moist embrace we can't escape... A womans dream could be of you BloomingRose |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BR~ this is stunning.... I enjoyed this very much.  -SEA |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thanks SEA Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW.....I think I like the woman's dreams.....whew....nice write my friend. See what the moon can do to you. Then mix it with the Autumn air and look what you get. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Show me love in this cool night air my dreams of you... quiet as these night skys' Very romantic! Loved it! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Such a wonderful dream. and poem for that matter. I hope that soon you wont have to dream anymore. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ Thanks, glad you agree... the moon and autumn can be a sweet mix. SP~ So glad it moved you too Keith~ Romantic dreams are a part of all women. It's what makes us who we are, even if we are content in life, we still are dreamers. Glad you like. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Debra...if you could only see the smile on my face as I sit here right now. I'm so glad I didn't miss out on this posting, it's truly wonderful. It is and has been such a pleasure to watch you grow and mature as a poet in fromt of my eyes. Take a bow for this one dear, you deserve it |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Applause from me BR, well and romantically done...makes me want to try a little of that myself now, I only hope to do as well. jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so pretty..loved it.. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ruth~ Thank you so much for your kind words. That means a lot to me. jwesly~ Thanks much! Glad you like. Victoria~ Thank You |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh how I love the moon and this is soooo wonderful to read. Kathleen |
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