Open Poetry #10 |
Gypsy Man |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I saw fire's flicker, entrancing, rhythm in my soul came dancing, I looked into a gypsy's eyes, reflections of myself despised, but laughter sparked into the night and warmth within the heart arise, uncaring of the thought of singe, I'm ready now, to dance again. Kick off your shoes and feel the sand. I'm ready, for you gypsy man... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I saw fire's flicker, entrancing, rhythm in my soul came dancing, I looked into a gypsy's eyes, reflections of myself despised, but laughter sparked into the night and warmth within the heart arise, ================== oh baby ..you look so lovely dancing round the fire... flame glow is your color girl *sigh*... my my my ... when will we ever learn me sweet??? the perverbial moth drawn to the flame ... good thing me wears singe-proof mascara *winkiewinkie* YA KNOW I LOVE THIS ONE...RIGHT?? yea YOU KNOW ... ya know me loves ya too .. yea you know goodnight me twin ... tis been a long one ...time to sleep this one away see ya in the morn...(yea I know NOT TOO EARLY) I'll bring the raspberry tea |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
OOOh what a delightful poem to read, very enjoyable Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM---wanted to thank you, for taking the time for me, as you always do...it means much to me...I love ya, gratefully... Tracie66--thank you as well, for your sweet reply...I have been enjoying your work as well. Hugs to you both. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
so you are dancing around the fires again are ya??? So when does one REALLY learn...or does it even matter that we do? Excellent write from you my friend. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Once more around the fire please. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Enjoyed the dancing merriment - 'laughter sparked into the night and warmth within the heart arise' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks twice to Mark, hugs m'friend... and Marge, methinks you've danced around a fire once or twice before yourself! Big Hugs for you as well.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved the images this brought to mind Serenity! Wonderfully picturesque ... with such positive conviction, much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Submit!!!! Loved the imagery in this one, serenity! |
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