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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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American dreams… America screams… Those white trash themes Full of disassociated schemes And America, so proud, she beams As we rip her apart at the seams [This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Effigy- wow...very powerful piece. nice write. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . If only we could sew it back together. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Effigy~ You write so cool.  By the way, You are in my latest poem -SEA |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Effigy, Wow is the first thing that comes to mind.. but that is usually the case when I read your poetry. I just love your style ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Effigy,...I am right behind everyone else in saying that this is way powerful and way cool. You have a style all your own that KIX! Strong words here. Take care you. *Peace. |
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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina |
Woof. Nice. I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry. |
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