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Storm Within |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Thoughts of you cloud my mind as memories rain upon my heart washing over my soul emersing me in "I remember when's" -SEA- [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-02-2000).] |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
So much said in so few words, the thoughts that this brings to mind is like a tidal wave. I enjoyed it very much! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OH man OH man Sea now you did it...now Im crying... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sea, What emotions this evokes. Very well done  ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
SEA You had me fooled. I expected to read a long poem with lots of imagery, but you have did it all with what little you wrote. I can picture a poor soul being overwhelmed with memories of a love lost. Simply good is all that needs to be said about this one. Garfield |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
T_of_G~ Feels like one, thanks Paula~ don't cry......you'll make me cry RP~ thank you Garfield~ sorry for messin with ya, I didn't mean to fool ya. Simply good works for me  thank you. -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Sending you *Hugs* to help you weather the storm ! Wade lightly through the remember when's ... Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Wonderful. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Simply said...well done HUGS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~thank you for stopping by for a dip in the pool of memories Effigy~ thank you very much Tracie~ Hugs back to ya, thanks -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Storm resides from within my heart As passing clouds kiss with thunder's touch Reminding me of days we dare not depart Memories dwell....I loved you this much I hold to past times that we once shared I cling to photos in the eyes of my mind I sing blues of sorrows in which we were paired Tears of which have my heart in passion's bind Do you see all that I feel in typhoons quake Can you see where rain stole this perfect team Will you turn from our love and forever sake Knowing you took my heart's lightning dream |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just riding the storm one more time.... cowboy loves storms |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ amazing reply, thank you, come back and ride the storm whenever you like! -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
WOW!!! Powerful indeed; simply a reminder that dynamite comes in small packages Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I loved your thoughts in this SEA ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a metaphor, Sea. I've had the very same thing happen to me quite a few times. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT!!!!!!!!!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely poem,, I thought of rainy days and mondays after reading it for some reason...  < !signature-->Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, Now this I love, really and truly, this is so evocative. really excellant excellant work. (Yes I know I typed it twice) This is lovely, and dips right into me. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
So many said in a few lines.... it brought me back to my storm within... excellent penned...*whiping a tear * Hugs Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- wow...so much emotion in so few words...beautiful. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A few words that express mountains of feelings, memories and pain. Well done. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful. Remember this, you are the SEA, powerful, earth giving and full of life. Corinne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Exactly and precisely...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
See how you inspire me....Hugs to you my sweet friend. /pip/Forum42/HTML/002050.html |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~Thank you...  Kit~ thank you so much Elizabeth~ sometimes it feels really good, doesn't it? Vandana~ Cool Jamie~ I love nothing better than a rainy day unless of course it's at the ocean Mushy~ (Marsha)you are so sweet!! Charisma~ Thank you Vicky~ it only took a few I guess RonK~ thanks Corinne~ ohh, I like that!! thank you James~ Hugs Mark~ you melted me with your reply "See how you inspire me..." UGH, made my knees go weak! Hugs to you sweet man. -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So tender SEA, very beautiful indeed Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh my!! I'm so glad I got to read this one! Stunning! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, had to pop back this is really beautiful, I don't know how you do it but whatever is it is you do, don't stop. Now if only those porters would stop trying to Hi-jack the MBOOPAS, and start their own group!! They already like your work, David 'the mole' tells them what we get up to. The question is would you want your very own fan club, particually when they're poters! Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ thank you so much.... Eagle One~ I am flattered thank you Mushy~ My own fan club?! I can't even imagine what that would be like, but you sure gave me warm fuzzies this morning!! I think I would like it TOO MUCH!! thank you!! -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, David, my mole from the porters tells me that the porters are really keen on adopting you as thier official poet. (Now all you have to do is accept the nomination as their poet) Of course if you'd rather not I'd perfectly understand after all, this is the porters we are talking about here! Oh and I would be very willing to post their replies to you. After all what are friends for and I'll make sure they keep it clean I promise.Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ Please tell David I said that would be wonderful and that I send him a big hug!! thank you!! -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, David says the porters are cock a hoop, well, actually, it was a lot more unprintable than that. But that was the gist of it. So maybe now they will stop stealing the MBOOPAS poems off our boards, well I can only hope! And David is blushing like mad, bless him. Although we've given him permission, as if he needed it, to belong to both MBOOPAS and whatever the porters decide to call themselves, he does say that he is a MBOOPAS, and will stay so. (I know you said you were reckless love, but..... I'll try to make them behave I promise) Oh and which name have you choosen, the suspense is killing the rest of the team. Take care Mushy or ? Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ You made me laugh like hell...What is a cock a hoop????? and I have yet to figure out what MBOOPAS stands for, I get the Mark Bohannan but the rest is ???? and as a name for you Mushy or Marsha??? I like them both, your name is very pretty and your heart is Mushy and sweet so I can't choose..... David, I can make you blush much easier just give me a chance -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, The list love, is on the end of Four Seasons Of Love, just take your pick. Cock a hoop, is sort of elation. And believe me they are, very pleased with themselves, they will be very hard to beat into submission. Well at least for a little while. MBOOPAS stands for the Mark Bohannan Official Office Poet Appreciation Society. I only hope that the porters come up with something tastefull, because if not, I'll veto it. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ LOVE IT!! -SEA |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, So beautifully done, a storm to ride over and over our memories yes in deed. But I love the fact that they can be put away in our hearts until ready to ride again most of the time any way. I have one storm I ride when need be, and even though it was once a very visious ride it now serves as a reminder of spent love that I would not give up for the world. Very much loved this one Sea and I think it belongs in my keep sake box, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cerenity~ I am touched, thank you so much..... -SEA |
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