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The Next Time
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The Next Time |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Next Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ You came in so cocky, strutting all over the place. Acting like I should fall flat upon my face. You said you wanted me to be yours and no one else's. I said, "No thank you, boy." I'm not falling in your trances. You said that I'd be sorry and that other girls would want you so. Well, don't let me stop you, Hurry up and go ! You thought that I would want you and you're also wrong about that. Hit the doorway running and don't forget your hat ! Let me fill you in on the message in this rhyme The next time that I want you will be the first time ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Jeez, Marge!!! Couldn't you at least have e-mailed this to me or something instead of making it so public???? I'm so mortified....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ LOL !  Check your e-mail address ... it came back ! Returned mail: User unknown ----- The following addresses had permanent fatal errors ----- [email protected] LOL ! You KNOW I love you - privately and publicly!  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is adorable, Marge, I love it! Corinne |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- WOW! this one certainly packs a harsh punch. i like very much. i hope you and balladeer can work things out...lol. -vicky  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Funny and interesting Marge...you can't blame a guy for trying....James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now Marge, you know 'Deer's heart gets mushy when LJA isn't kicking him around...and by the way, 'Deer's e: is bigbuck@ROTFLMAO .com Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
ROFL!!!!! [email protected]!!! A lot of people might agree with ya on that one!!! You're a treasure, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Thanks, gal ! It was just a little spin-off of a line I heard on TV tonight ! Vicky~ LOL ! Me and Balladeer are always goofing off ! He's my favorite goof ! And it's so easy to push his button -  James~ It's just a funny ! Karilea~ LOL ! Oh, I've got his number alright ! Balladeer~ I LUV YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I learned there are some Marge 'buttons' one should never push - (shame on you 'deer ) (good one Marge ) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marge, I know this guy who's just like that...(Romeo)...thanks everyone for the laughs I got from this string. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Marge, great poem on putting HIM in his place! Loved it!!  sp |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Marge, Pluleaze Marge, now everyone knows! My goodness, it's now all over the airways. But, I didn't know that Balladeer was involved too! Oh darn! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Whew.....so glad to find out it was Balladeer and not me.....but remembered that the last time I was there I DIDN'T wear my hat anyway. Ya had me scared there Marge baby and please don't tell my sweet (that I forgot to wear my hat, that is)...she would be so ashamed of me.LOLOL |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh Myyyy..the replies in here just kill me sometimes.........LMAO AS for this poem........YOU GOT THE POWER GIRL!!! I love it when we put "them" in their place......the sad thing is....it's usually when we do that they end up wanting us more then ever.....LOL...And they say woman are complex........ Jenn E |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge Why did you have to put us all in place that none of us want to be. You could have been a little more tactful in your poetry.LOL This was excellent as always Marge. Garfield |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Balladeer can push my buttons any day of the week ... and twice on Sundays ! Dixie~ Glad to share our smiles with you. SnowPants~ Glad you liked it. Bill~ Well, Grandma always said - 'A man doesn't look under the bed, unless he's hid there a time or two !' MarkB~ LOL ! A hatless cowboy ... hmmmmm ! JennE~ Glad you liked it and yes, they are funny in their replies. GGRN~ Oh, oh ... Yeah ! I'm know for my tact, alright ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...why do I have the feeling it's going to be a very ticklish Sunday?... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is great, what a put down, and I love it. Certainly packs a punch, no mistaking the message at all, oh how I wish I'd had this a few months ago. Still what's that saying 'if wishes were horses beggers would ride'. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Terrific poem, Marge!! Whew, is it great to be here reading and replying! Keep em coming! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie *now let's see if this darn password works*!! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Got a *giggle* to share ?? Marsha~ Glad you liked it ! LilLizzie~ Now my face is lit with the biggest smile I've had in a long time ! I could just hug your little neck ! {{{{{HUGS}}}} Love you my favorite little friend in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD ! I'm soooooooooooooo happy ! Enjoy and come back in here more often. You'd better send me your password so the NEXT time you can't remember it I'll have it for you ! Thanks for being you and for loving me. ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You tell em...it's one of your special charms..love ya, gal!!! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
lol this was really cute marge way to go... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you tell him Marge haa..good one |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Yeah ... that's me - all charm ! Yah !  Tori~ I love it when you show up to play at Passion's. Need to do it more often. Glad you got a smile out of it. Victoria~ Pleased to know you liked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...WOW you tell him girl...HAHAHAHA...I LIKE IT. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Loved the flair in this one Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Think he got the message ? Dani~ You're always uncovering the bestest stuff ! What a gal ! Thanks, friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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