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Summer Storm Haiku collection for Ethans Challenge
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Summer Storm Haiku collection for Ethans Challenge |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Post Meridian Deluge~ ~*~ sunshine on shoulders reflections cast on water tans my skin and soul ~*~ humid summer breeze hazy late afternoon sky thunder head clouds build ~*~ storms rise in day's heat thunder echoes in distance cloud bursts drench parched earth ~*~ warm rain falls in waves torrent creates sudden streams children run barefoot ~*~ clouds break and open sunbeams finger thru dark mist rainbows arch in sky ~*~ Mother Nature's fury Mother Nature's gifts of grace Mother Nature's calm ~*~  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My God, girl!!!! Is there nothing you can't do....and do well? Beautiful..... |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
These are fantastic! I love the simple yet complex form of these. Especially enjoyed the second one, and a tan is always great! |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
"storms rise in day's heat thunder echoes in distance cloud bursts drench parched earth" "...children run barefoot" what a great collection! i'd say i'm going to miss summer, but i lived in Vegas and now i've moved to Phoenix, so the weather of summer is not as beautiful as you describe it. 'round her, it's rather routine (sun, heat, sun, heat). but these Haikus paint a delightful picture, and i'm very happy to see such an overwhelming number of responses to the challenge from just YOU!!  outstanding work, as always JM. much love to ya! Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JM my friend....these are excellent and YOU know I love a good storm. I love the way you tied them all together and just rode the storm for all it was worth. Excellent my friend...but of course ....right? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JM...these are so perfect...and the rainbow is fantastic..thank you for gifting me with this lovely peace. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Janet Marie all the passion of a summer storm, a summer day, portrayed by the poets hands and expressed beautifully I loved these....and the graphic of the rainbow is a beautiful touch... Greeneyes |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet, Ohhhh I like this!! They are simply wonderful  I think I like the 5th one the best. Very well done ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely beautiful and wonderful and vivid works here...and I think Balladeer is right and there's nothing you can't do extremely well, my friend. *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thanks everyone, Ethan, thanks for the challenge ... Haikus arent my strong point so ya made me work and thats always a good thing. I found that amazing picture and knew I had to write about it in some way. Sweet sweet Deer and Krista... if you only knew....it be a lot easier to tell you what I DO -do well... than the other way around.. but i do so love ya for only seeing my good side. thankyou for those generous sweet replies. later-end of my rainbow-gators  me |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ I am completely blown away...these are so beautiful.  -SEA |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
All hail Haiku Queen!! LOL  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Cowboy is just roping the storm for one more ride.....Yeeeeeeeeehhhhaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!!!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"clouds break and open sunbeams finger thru dark mist rainbows arch in sky" All have beautiful imagery Janet Marie, but if I try to pick a favorite (though you make it nearly impossible girl!), I choose this lovely haiku above. No, the first one, no ... the third one ... doh! I love them all!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
That was beautiful, Janet. And I loved the picture! Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Janet Marie, This is stunning, some would say poetry can be addictive, well if so, I'm addicted to yours! Anyone who can create these kind of feelings has a gift and you do. I know I appreciate this, it lifts me and it means something. Thank you. Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thank you all ...Im smiling from ear to ear... I never feel like my Haikus have the impact that they are supposed to.. but YOUR REPLIES DO!!!! thank you for the boost of confidnece and to Irish Rose ... MY GOODNESS you make my day dear!!!! what a wonderful thing to say ... thank you so much ... yes poetry is very addicting ... but as for being addicted to mine ... I'll warn ya ...your gonna need tylenol LOL with my mood swings its bumpy ride THANK YOU Kathleen for such a sweet compliment. thanks to all my sweet gators love ya me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
TOTALLY FLIPPING AWESOME... "cloud bursts drench parched earth..." and ain't it so? AND AIN'T IT GRAND? You, m'dear, are a natural witch (and we'll forget about the capitalization, FOR NOW) lOVE YOU---hope to be back later---it's been one of "dem daze..." |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
what a beautiful picture..and lovely haiku's |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet~~ this is awesome~ i cant write haikus to save my life so i really now am sitting in awe of you you got it going on girl and im just loving reading your work. love ya, amy p.s. maybe i'll try to write a haiku...god help us all lol "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Such a lovely set of haiku's, you turned them into a work of art! Your poetry motivates me to someday reach your level of perfection! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 ~~~~~~~~~~ (adding new address for picture used) http://wsphotofews.excite.com/022/ia/1W/G3/9L34690.jpg |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Girl, you're awesome at all styles of poetry! Melissa~ |
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