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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Dreaming Déjà Vu it came first at eighteen and I still think of that dream it was when I first saw you someday, I thought, déjà vu at twenty-eight I dreamed again and wondered at the where or when or even if there would be a then someday, I hoped, déjà vu then thirty-eight snuck up on me and still I failed to see but I kept on at what I do hoping to dream of déjà vu now at forty-eight I realize the dream shall stay behind my eyes for in the dream at least you come to me and with you, I'll déjà vu ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 1 October, 2000 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, don't give up hope kid, there's always a chance than when you least expect it, the one will fall in your lap. I love this Kari, it's as beautiful as your soul. Still just in case he doesn't suddenly appear, keep your eyes peeled, for any likely looking prospects. If nothing else you could enjoy checking them out,  Now if I see any that I think might suit, I'll send them over shall I? Take care Marsha |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Marsha you're so right, I'm a 48 year old kid...LOL...thank you sweets... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Are you trying to tell me that you Stop being a kid at some point??  This is a wonderful poem my friend. . . it'll happen. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, Deja vue! Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh Karilea, Great thoughts, wonderful poem. And now I understand why we seem to be on the same wavelength....it's the age thang......I could swear I'm only 18, it's only the husband and kids who keep reminding me to put a 4 where the 1 is...... Love this. Bonnie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
As long as you're 48 going on 18 it works... I assure you...  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What's all this talk about growing up???? I say if you are going to talk about Deja Vu then you need to mention Crosby,Stills, Nash and Young......BTW.....great read but never ever give up on your dreams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And deja vu to you. I'm way past that and don't worry the waters warm. LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, only some of us...but I still watch Peter Pan, and clap...so no, I guess not... thank you Kethry yes, Bonnie, I know! Nan, I believe you! Mark, OK, Sir, I won't... Sy, I'm acquainted with your remark, and I'm smiling all the way...thank you! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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