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Mark's challenge. kinetic craft
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Mark's challenge. kinetic craft |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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I am in kinetic motion, a blur of limbs and bounding ideas swirling in chaos. There is no rest for me weary still I drive on, The fires forever fuel my desires. I am without direction nor need of guidance. What I create may burst with brilliant tones and extreme shades, bordering on a destructive flow, what is my art but a reflection of myself? *Boundless spiralling aspirations raging into turmoil*, ink explodes with endless ideas I am lost in the great effort to pen them all. Yet it seems a curse this thirst this mad ness for me it is my life, my blood my sweat I live For this Riding the storms and the dou bts of the torn ado wit h I n . =========================== This poem was first written after Lost Dreamer donated lines my inspiration challenge. I don't know if this fits your Graphics challenge... it is supposed to be a tornado LOL I still have not figured out how to use different text colours. * lines written by Lost dreamer. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ I believe this was very nicely done. Certainly a tornadic whirling of thoughts. Way to go ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Brian-This is AWESOME and just for your info I have a fascination for tornados and YES it does meet the challenge and meets it well. I am printing this and adding it to my library as well. I will send you something to help with the colors my friend. Keep an eye on your email and it will be there tonight. Thank you for taking and meeting the challenge. BTW-The verse swept me away also and please tell her thank you for from me. And a little something for you to enjoy. /pip/Forum42/HTML/000015.html [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Challenge well met, Brian! Very creative! Yes, you can tell it's a tornado! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAY COOL BRI...when you scroll it up and down it looks like its spinning... very deep poem by LW as well..KUDOS to you both... later-twister-gator eve |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
It is a tornado! We got caught in it And all our words will swirl with you You are not alone To think as you do My problem is I cannot write it down I wish I could So I would not be so crazy monique |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Brian, You can definately tell it is a tornado!  And even though I am scared to death of them.. I love this poem... Very well written and the shapes makes it perfect rp25 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A perfect image for the poem Brian....and I'm [email protected] ya know I HAD to scroll up and down like she said...just to see...and shhhhhhhh don't tell her...but, she's right  Glad to see you here Brian |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Brian what a little whirlwind of passion you are. Reading your work was a dizzying experience. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, when I saw the word "kinetic" I KNEW someone had hit on tornados...and I too was swept away! Another idea [of mine] has now bit the dust...sigh...back to the drawing board [and I'm so NOT good at this...]< !signature--> Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Excellent brian I really like this. I didn't know you were into the twist! LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Blown away. (couldn't resist) Not the first time either. You've got a remarkable perspective on life, Brian...and btw, don't feel bad about the color thing, I just learned how to cut and paste...sigh...(now EVERYBODY, go ahead and laugh...I can't hear you!) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Brian, I hope you don't mind my browsing thru the files, but the topic caught my eye and knowing the writes you've shared I had to take a peak inside. My compliments on the presentation but you got me hook line and sinker on your writing it's awesome in this one! Ciao Coco |
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