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A Letter To My Lover
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A Letter To My Lover |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I gaze at the pictures you gave me And I see the man my hearts looked for I see the life where I long to be I know it wont be easy I know things are gonna be tough But I believe in our love And I have faith that its strong enough Love conquers all Ive heard it said And I believe thats true Love has brought you and I together And no matter what Ive given my heart to you We've already had some sad times And our love came through stronger than before But this is the hardest thing we've been faced with And the miles between us just makes us ache more My faith in our love just gets stronger My love for you daily grows And even if our plans take a while longer We can make it happen I know So listen to your lovers heart Hear the words that its speaking We can make it through anything my darlin As long as its each others hearts we are seeking |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Any and all problems that come along can be faced because of the shared loved....which you've said so eloguently. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"We can make it through anything my darlin As long as its each others hearts we are seeking" Beautiful thoughts Paula ... with a love as powerful as you described, it can conquer all. Very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
chanson...yes troubles shared are troubles halved...I believe that Kit...I HOPE so I truly do hope so |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...The last two lines say it all... Love will find it's place if two share the same desires...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When you both feel it then you know it is right and time will cover all of the boundaries in full fashion. You have come a long way in your writing and it shows greatly. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...thank you friend you know my heart Mark...you are always here with a compliment...I cant tell you what that means |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sounds like a long-distance relationship..those can be very difficult... but it also sounds like the two of you have a strong bond..thats good very nice writing..full of love  hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula... This is a lovely poem full of hope and promise......it's good to see!!  Follow your dream! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, a real love letter! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
dg...well it was at one time...but thanks Sunny...its old girlie...but thanks anyways Irish Rose...a memory...but yes a love letter as well...thanks |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'We can make it through anything my darlin As long as its each others hearts we are seeking' And that is the only way to make it through together. Excellent poem, Paula! I love it! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My hope for you Paula is that all your dreams come true and you find every thing your heart has ever dreamed for...beautiful writing~ |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks for letting us glimpse inside your heart... keep the soul-shine coming! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Dreams do come true my dear Paula, they do. Loved to see you open up so much, well done. "My faith in our love just gets stronger My love for you daily grows And even if our plans take a while longer We can make it happen I know" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ This is incredibly beautiful and such a well written piece Winged ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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