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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2000-09-30 11:03 PM


I gaze  at the pictures you gave me
And I see the man my hearts looked for
I see the life where I long to be
I know it wont be easy
I know things are gonna be tough
But I believe in our love
And I have faith that its strong enough
Love conquers all Ive heard it said
And I believe thats true
Love has brought you and I together
And no matter what Ive given my heart to you
We've already had some sad times
And our love came through stronger than before
But this is the hardest thing we've been faced with
And the miles between us just makes us ache more
My faith in our love just gets stronger
My love for you daily grows
And even if our plans take a while longer
We can make it happen I know
So listen to your lovers heart
Hear the words that its speaking
We can make it through anything my darlin
As long as its each others hearts we are seeking

© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
1 posted 2000-09-30 11:09 PM


Any and all problems that come along can be faced because of the shared loved....which you've said so eloguently.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-09-30 11:19 PM


"We can make it through anything my darlin
As long as its each others hearts we are seeking"

Beautiful thoughts Paula ... with a love as powerful as you described, it can conquer all. Very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-10-01 11:44 AM


chanson...yes troubles shared are troubles halved...I believe that

Kit...I HOPE so I truly do hope so

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-10-01 03:38 PM


Beautiful...The last two lines say it all...
Love will find it's place if two share the same desires...James

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-01 03:42 PM


When you both feel it then you know it is right and time will cover all of the boundaries in full fashion.  You have come a long way in your writing and it shows greatly.
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
6 posted 2000-10-03 01:08 AM


James...thank you friend you know my heart

Mark...you are always here with a compliment...I cant tell you what that means

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-10-23 03:43 AM


sounds like a long-distance relationship..those can be very difficult...  but it also sounds like the two of you have a strong bond..thats good  

very nice writing..full of love  

hugs, dg


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
8 posted 2000-10-23 03:46 AM


Paula...
This is a lovely poem full of hope and promise......it's good to see!!  


Follow your dream!


Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

9 posted 2000-10-24 05:29 PM


this is lovely, a real love letter!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
10 posted 2000-10-25 12:39 PM


dg...well it was at one time...but thanks

Sunny...its old girlie...but thanks anyways

Irish Rose...a memory...but yes a love letter as well...thanks


snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
11 posted 2000-10-25 12:45 PM


'We can make it through anything my darlin
As long as its each others hearts we are seeking'

And that is the only way to make it through together.  Excellent poem, Paula!  I love it!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
12 posted 2000-10-25 12:46 PM


My hope for you Paula is that all your dreams
come true and you find every thing your
heart has ever dreamed for...beautiful
writing~

Toddles
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana
13 posted 2000-10-25 12:54 PM


Thanks for letting us glimpse inside your heart... keep the soul-shine coming!

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
14 posted 2000-10-25 02:38 AM


Dreams do come true my dear Paula, they do. Loved to see you open up so much, well done.

"My faith in our love just gets stronger
My love for you daily grows
And even if our plans take a while longer
We can make it happen I know"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
15 posted 2000-10-25 03:05 AM


Paula~
This is incredibly beautiful and such a  well written piece  
Winged ~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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