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Sweet Voice |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Sweet Voice Words that pour like melted butter Maple syrup on my waffles Five Star Brandy on my palate Single malt Scotch Undiminished by phone wires Bringing new energy to my day Awakening my synapses like Blue Mountain coffee Addiction now is too mild a word Like a junkie must I need my fix Awaiting the flash onscreen That tells me 'call' ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
whew, that must be one heck of a voice, Mr. Yeats, for you to expound so...deep and smooth, hummm? Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wtih an incredible comparison to a strong addiction ... you've expressed the want and anxious "need" beautifully with these delectable words Wilfred!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - That connection is all I've said for me and More thank youKit - MMM - "delectable words" seems I left a good word out - Thank you |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written, smooth and rich poetry. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...A voice can sometimes mean so much...you have shown that in this beautiful, sensory poem. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhhhhhh how i know this feeling, and when you need to hear that voice, wonderful write bill... Greeneyes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes...yes yes yes |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Brian- Thank you - I especially liked the signature statement by Patti Smith Martie- You should hear her voice as I hear it thank youGreen Eyes- Some voices we want to hear we never get to hear- others - when we do are shear magic Paula - It sounds like you understand Thank you ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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