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desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 2000-09-26 05:26 AM

I never said goodbye
I never walked away
I never made you cry
I never made you stay

I never lost my mind
I never shed a tear
I never was unkind
I never had a fear

I never lived with pride
I never was so cruel
I never thought I lied
I never played the fool

yet all these things I've done
since the day I heard your name
and what once I knew was fun
has now brought me shame

I never knew I loved you
until you walked away
I never had so much to do
as I did on that one day

I never meant to hurt you
I never heard you cry
I never heard you walk away
I never said goodbye

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2000-09-26 06:59 AM

How sad... regrets last a long, long time, don't they? *S* This format works well...

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2000-09-26 08:04 AM

the format in this is great! really enjoyed the depth of emotion put into this one friend. excellent writing.
take care,
amy
p.s. perhaps show this to the person it is to? just an idea

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2000-09-26 08:22 AM

desperado,

You can feel the emotion of regret jump out at you from this page. Great writing.. I liked it

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2000-09-26 08:36 AM

*smooch*

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

5 posted 2000-09-27 12:07 PM

I can feel the pain of this poem so well it brings tears to my eyes. Beautiful writing.

Waverly917

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2000-09-27 12:19 PM

Hi there. Nice to see you. I like what you did with this.

My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-09-27 12:29 PM

~D,...very well written expression. This reads great and is loaded with emotion. Super. Take care now. *Peace.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

8 posted 2000-09-27 12:31 PM

Truly wonderful, in form and format. I like it a lot.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2000-09-27 06:07 AM

Desperado~
Oh my !
Gorgeous ... it grabs my heart and squeezes.
Loved the format too.
You take care ... glad to see you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2000-09-27 06:56 AM

and a big old Groucho Hug to go with Doreen's smooch....

desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

11 posted 2000-09-27 11:00 PM

well, just a quick note before I take off to catch the bus to lunch. thanks for the replies. just wish I had a chance to give something back, they been working me till 9 the past week just about. ragged stuff this is. but I'll try to come back this evening if I'm not too burned out and put more than just a poem up here. take care you guys. see you when I see you.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2000-09-28 09:43 AM

Desperado~ This touched my heart.....I can't describe how....I'm at a loss for words.....this is really amazing.

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2000-09-28 12:16 PM

Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

14 posted 2000-09-29 12:48 PM

A captivating read Desperado...

Coco

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

15 posted 2000-09-30 10:28 PM

Amazingly written. Regrett hurts alot, i like the way you expressed yourself~
BirdeeB

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