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No Morning this Morning |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458
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As the morning grows long Some might say We have only wasted The day away. In my book it's a investment we have made As we nutured our marriage Laying about in bed. Sure a busy beaver I could have been I've been awake since ten of seven When some money hungry man And his jackhammer broke the "silence" That the policewoman on the other side of the phone Says is to last till 9am on Saturday... (As if she cared) But laying aside my man And snozing off and on a bit Making memories of loving and lust... What an perfect way To "waste" a day.  [This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now I know why LJA is so happy all the time. You my dear are one sweet woman and if you two want to waste a day like this then I would say so be it. Maybe you could inspire him to write one of a cowboy in love with a butterfly or something!!!!(hint hint)....Loved you verse and hope to see more from you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmilingAtLorelei~ Never have I seen a day that I felt I wasted or let slip away ... Others may look with consternation when I choose to spend it in hibernation. But ... I would do something about LongJohn's snoring - jackhammer indeed !  Love ya', gal - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Memories of loving and lust"... Now THAT sounds like a priority in life to me!!!...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The perfect morning....filled with love. Wonderful! Could you write me a prescription for that? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh Lorelei, it sounds like a perfectly wonderful morning ... there is nothing sweeter than the closeness and contentment you've described so beautifully! When you can tune out jackhammers, you know it's a deep and wonderful love! Best wishes to you both, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lorelei, what a wonderful way to start the day, you and LJ jackhammers beating out a rhythm of the Congo... time for a little snuggle and maybe a horizontal dance. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
What a way to waste the day. And what a way to awaken at ten of seven. LJA is lucky to have you. Keep nurturing your marriage and your love. It can only become stronger. Garfield |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
not a moment was wasted ... ya made memories ... ya made pretty poetry ya made pirate whoopie ...  what more can a Saturday hope for *smile* bet Sundays are even better  love the sentiments of this poem.. sweet read..sweet poet take care later-make-a-pirate-smile-gator jm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow! Jackhammers beating out a rhythym and a busy beaver!!! What a combination! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lil Lorelei - snoozing away, and here we've again "wasted a day." How I love these weekends, and how I love my Lorelei. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
I've changed my mind and now decided Loving and lusting is not a waste of a day The memories, the feelings now excited. What a wonderful weekend of play. Thank you one and all for your sweet comments..no jackhammers today...I've finally caught up on my sleep. As for writing a prescription for this kind of love...do for your partner as you would have them do for you. Kindness wears off and you get twofold in return. ps...for Nan...where is my mermaid icon? thanks |
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