Open Poetry #10 |
I'll just call you my.. |
just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I'll Just Call You... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I don't tell you everything that's going on with me, but still you see things my other friends don't see. You know what i'm going to say before it even comes out. You can always tell how I feel and your an expert at making me pout. You can answer all my questions (not that you do) before i even ask. I've did a lot of things wrong but you keep it in the past. (sometimes) No one knows the extent of the things we have been through. No one understands how much I care about you. You know me better than anyone. Sometimes even better then me. You know everything I want, how I think that things should be. My heart is in your hands, just where it's always been. So till the day we meet (and we will) I'll just call you my very special friend. (don't think ur girl would like it if i called you my man) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I do certainly like this one. It can be wonderful, and indeed sometimes scary, when one knows you so well. It is especially difficult in the situation you portray here. ************************** My heart is in your hands, just where it's always been. So till the day we meet (and we will) I'll just call you my very special friend. ************************ Great writing, I love it! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is wonderful! Maybe treasure this one away for that special day! Best of luck to ya! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is very nice. sounds like a tough situation you are in. i too once was in this exact place (not too long ago). just go with your heart, and treasure the friendship for what it is. and if it's meant to be it will be take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hello! Welcome back. . . it's been a while since I've seen you post here. . . This is an excellent poem. . . this kind of situation is always confusing. . . Well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Thanks guyz...its a very tough situation thatnks for the good luck im sure ill need it. nice to see you to sven!!! missed you all |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi just-another-fe, Wonderful hope here and I wish only the best to come your way. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wonderful piece, Just! I wish you luck in the future! Take care and peace! Nathan |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow! The last line caught me by surprise! Excellent write! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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