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In a Whisper
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In a Whisper |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
In a Whisper Shall ye be adored by a true heart or shall ye care not who thy keeper would be Settle not for the crumbs which fall upon the floor but seek ye the full feast of thy hearts longings Know ye not my love just to feel thy soft warm kisses upon my lips Transports my soul unto a faraway land Of enchantment where only lovers dwell Thy beauty is my comfort as I dream of thee If only my kiss could be the key that unleashes the passions that doth burn firey white within thy soul As I Breath in the air of love I find myself lost in the hazy corridors of a distant sigh Upon a soft whisper my soul is calling unto thee my love Will thy heart hear the sweet enchantment My soul sings unto thee Or will thee enter ones Garden who offers but half his soul Open thy heart that ye might hear sweet maid This song of love mine heart sings unto thee Liken unto a nightingale's sweet song On a spring night This gift I offer freely unto thee the calmness of true love In knowing only thee shall I cherish always Loneheart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Loneheart~ ***SWOONING*** this is beyond beautiful~beyond romantic.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Loneheart, What devotion and love fill the lines of this piece. Now this is a peek at true romance. Well written!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Thank you Sea for thy kindness not one of my better works but never the less I need to start posting again my lifes been so busy lately I am getting out of touch with my true passion . |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Many thanks Lone Wolf I enjoy your work as well Loneheart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Loneheart, I love whispers, and this will have to be added to my library, for later reading and sharing with those of the heart... well done...I am in awe... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
this is very beautiful and I have two whisper replies but must put them in the adult just so no one thinks they are too much for the open poetry... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Loneheart~ Oh what sweet whispers, tenderly potrayed...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is too beautiful to be on the back page! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So very beautiful and delicate...excellent weaving~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Loneheart, Trully beautiful, so much enjoyed this one, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Thanks All for the kind words I wish I could spent more time in our little forum but my work takes quit often I hope to get back to posting more poems this winter or as soon as my work slows down till then I will just have to settle for popping in once in awhile I truly feel we have some of the finest poets in the world in our forum and plan to be with you all many years to come With Warm Wishes for all. Thy Servant Always Loneheart |
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