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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dreams come true Many times I dreamed of you always hoping dreams come true. Some say they don't. Some say they do. I have to say yes, dreams come true. For in a second my dream came true on the day that I met you. You looked so much like the woman in my dreams. You ever talked as she. And when we kissed that was it for me. That kiss gave it all away. Somehow you were exactly like the woman in my dreams in every way. Living in the arms of you no other dream will ever do. You are the woman making every one of my dreams come true. Jameslee@September29,2000 Minayouarethewomanofmydreams. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Mina needs to wake up and smell the coffee, lucky woman!!! Lovely dreams!  |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
James I think Mina is a lucky woman too. Give her this one and make her smile. I believe she will like your pensive style. Give her a kiss, and make her grin. Tell her you love her, again and again. Garfield |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ Mina is lucky, and this is incredibly sweet. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, Wonderful writing my friend. She is indeed a lucky lady to inspire such poetry and feelings. This reminds me of a song by Frozen Ghost called Dream Come True. ever hear it? Beautiful really. Love this. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
We should all be as lucky as Mina!  Great writing!! Loved it!! sp |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...lovely dear simply lovely...Mina has a great guy |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
James this is so romantic, and I'm glad your dreams are coming true! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Agreeing with all the above James. Show this to Mina to show how your dreams came true. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Romantic, ggm3, Sea, LoneWolf, snowpants, Paula, Rosebud and Eloise for the wonderful replies.... Romantic I wish she would wake up in my house and smell the coffee...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James. . . if she doesn't after this one. . . then I would tell you to pour the coffee all over her!!! Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James, I am sure she can smell whatever you brew at any time of the day. This is a wonderful dream and I Know that you will be "living" it for many more years to come and onto the next life as well. A love this strong could not be anything other than right. As for pouring the coffee all over her...ignore that....just hand deliver it and show her you are willing to take that extra step ALWAYS......Superb penning by you my friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sven and Mark for the wonderful comments...I thing that me and Mina will just go out for breakfast and have a nice cup of coffee and talk stories for a while...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me and Mina went to the park in Pearl City and had a picnic yesterday...really enjoyed the time with her... One more cruise thru poetry land...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
They do you know James, they do indeed come true. Take care, I always enjoy your work, and this is another one that's a beauty. Marsha |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great to know that dreams come true. Mina is lucky to have you, thanks for sharing this Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm glad I read your replies before i clicked - I might have said something presumptious and stupid - I wish for you two to grow in friendship until it is so deep - that love buds it its fullest flower from it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marsha, Charisma, Katleen and Wilfred for the nice reponses. Yes Wilfred I like that friendship wish....James |
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