Open Poetry #10 |
Globberman and Guulekslick |
Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
With Globberman and Guulekslick I crave the fontanblue For in the durshall mytermine I see a bit of you In openness I fondulack With peace and poetry So bring your wistenalia To set my spirit free If all this cammospiel is new To ears of the woolery Remember sometimes it’s fun To write in ‘tomfoolery’ [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Doc. Suess would be prodiferously proud! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Woo Hoo!! I love really this it my mind make laugh timessome it is to this read from you cool very!! Great!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I couldn't resist the title ... I was going to look some of these words up in the dictionary until I read the ending LOL |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sounds like a German version of Dr. Suess. LOL I too was sittin here thinking, Sharon this is the first one you wrote that I don't understand! LOL I love it! Great ending! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Denise
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LOL Now here is an attention grabbing title!! Thanks for the levity, Sharon!! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Do you think a title is important? Yes! |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
DeVine one, I am gerstocknit at the depth of your brestivery!! |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just trying for a little verlysmacking in this hossenstabler.... |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Loved this Sharon! What a splendiferous creation ... you weave imaginantisy beautifully! Now help, cause my dictionary's broken! Best wishes, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This reminds me of Jabberwocky. But I like it much better. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
PDV, This one needs no doctor , just thought I'd make a house call , My-t fine reading here .Oops I'm being paged , gotta go ! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
quite so muchlick of of the flabberjab I found upheavealed mein heeartenstroke did laughenjibe all over desen shirtentees (translation: I loved it) [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
supercalifragilisticexpialidocious... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ehehe way kewl sharon! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ok Sharon, you're ready to go hunting the Snark. Loved this poem. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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