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Open Poetry #10
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PeterPeter
Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30
British, London
0 posted 2000-09-28 12:29 PM

Hiding Sun                                    

You can never hide
You can never run
For in our world
You’re our only Sun

Bringer of light
Bringer of life
Bringer of beauty
Without, no sight

So stay in our sky
So shine each day
So never go away
Without you

We’d surely die
© Copyright 2000 PeterPeter - All Rights Reserved
joy hester
Junior Member
since 2000-09-21
Posts 10
1 posted 2000-09-28 12:45 PM

I really enjoyed this piece!  I felt a lot of
warm emotion as well as admiration!
Thanks!
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-09-28 01:29 PM



I know you're not
talking of me to me
but I'm going to
sing the rest of the
day, anyway...


Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ
vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
3 posted 2000-09-28 05:58 PM

Welcome to passions,nice poem!!!!!!
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