The Lady Fair, Inspired by Waverly917's poem

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Open Poetry #10

The Lady Fair, Inspired by Waverly917's poem

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-09-27 03:20 PM

This was inspired by Waverly917's poem, "The knight of most true" Hope you enjoy.

Some would say that she would be
The pretiest thing fom sea to sea
I know its so, but please let me add
Why this can make me so sad

Many a rose I have to her given
And many a kiss gladly given
The rose and the kiss are of true love
Surely she was sent from above

The kisses to to a lady fair
Who makes me feel electricity in the air
Though she be so far away
This lady fair, in my heart she will satay

The lady goes by Abrabear, but just to me
As others do not see as I see
Her beauteous enchantment
That is this hearts entrapment

I went afar and this lady did too
In defferent directions we both flew
Seperate for days ehtn weeks and months too
Waiting quietly for our love most true

Time speeds at its own slow pace
And until we meeet again in another place
One thing stands true, though it makes the pain deep
Love lies abroad and this love is love to keep

To keep such love is easier said
Some mornings I wonder why I get out of bed
This love I feel does not go away
Not for one moment in the long lonely day

I will wait for her through the days
THough dispair start to hinder my ways
This love I feel, she feels too
For this one little reason I will tell you

She is my lady and I her knight
And thoughts of her always make things bright
The lady and the rose, with a kiss from the knight
Just make everything all right
And its not long until we reunite

Keith

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-09-27 03:54 PM

Keith,
I really like this poem, It has good strong metre. I also like your signature very neat.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

2 posted 2000-09-27 06:09 PM

I'm glad that I provide inspiation to such knight as you.

Love it. lol

Abra

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

3 posted 2000-09-28 05:17 PM

Kethry, thanks for responding, and the signiature is true....

Waverly, You know that I get most of my inspiration from you.

Keith

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.

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