Open Poetry #10 |
Trapped in life |
joy hester Junior Member
since 2000-09-21
Posts 10 |
Trapped in this thing called life, can't get out and I don't know why. Everything is falling down around me. Trapped in this thing called life; Do you understand my strife? No, I don't think you do. Trapped ina life that's gone, The day YOU left, it came undone... Why can't you see it's YOUR fault?? Trapped in the blaming game, For everyone knows you're to blame! The day is gone in your eyes. Now everything is polished bright, Nothing's wrong in their sight-- It's just a perfect prison wall... And no one knows each others thoughts, but faces tell the life that's not.. And all is good---in a book. Trapped...................................... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I feel that way sometimes too...it's why I like writing so much. Nice job, here joy, and if this is personal, I do hope you feel better soon... |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Wow, I hope you are able to break free from your trap without breaking free from life. I wish you the best of luck. Abra |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Trapped in this thing call life Putting up with the everday strife. Walking through this world without a hand Realizing you leave no footprints in the sand Break the chains Place you feet in wet concrete Leave your mark on humanity. Oh!!! But you already have With this wonderful gem you've written here. Garfield |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME!! Blame game and head games, two of the worst! I hate those games! I hope you see the brighter side of things soon! Sending rainbow smiles your way, in hopes of lightening up your day! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome Joy... it can be hard to see life as anything but a trap sometimes can't it? I understand...hugs, hope it gets easier soon K "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joy, First let me say welcome to Passions Second.. I hope things get better for you. I think trapped is a feeling we have all had.. and I hope you find your escape soon. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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