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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Something happens to me when I see you a rhythm my heart adopts alive and strong when I catch sight of my reflection in your startling gaze when I hear my own voice echoed in your whisper, in your laughter this day of reckoning is approaching not for our souls but for our hearts when I can dive into you immerse myself in your happiness and wash myself in the glory that is you a glow that surrounds you borrowed I think from angels There is an aching for you deep in my being buried under the bitterness awaiting this release and I find myself blooming then in the sun of our early spring this warmth of our auras exciting a friction in heat and even the cold of winter's promise cannot calm the embers glowing within |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well look at this, {~,^} a keeper for my library....than you MI.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a glow that surrounds you borrowed I think from angels There is an aching for you deep in my being buried under the bitterness awaiting this release and I find myself blooming then in the sun of our early spring this warmth of our auras exciting a friction in heat and even the cold of winter's promise cannot calm the embers glowing within ================== beautiful....yes...felt deep with in... isnt it wonderful to have this kind of anticipation... very well written..and lace with the warm glow of sensuality.. take care jm |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is just an excellent!! poem MI I think you might have touched at one of your best. "There is an aching for you deep in my being buried under the bitterness awaiting this release..." I think it's great from top to bottom, such well placed thoughts, such personal intimacys unfolding from the perspective of your mind.. Really enjoyed!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic |
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