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Interloper
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0 posted 2000-11-16 01:11 PM



SEA and the Sunshine
Always there for you and me
Tidal and warming

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-11-16 01:15 PM


Yes it's a haiku...one that I liked...good work Interloper!

Elizabeth

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I wouldn't care if it was a Haiku or not, I loved it!!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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3 posted 2000-11-16 01:19 PM


Not just a haiku. But a very lovley one!

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4 posted 2000-11-16 01:41 PM


SEA!  Look what Interloper did...two "forevers" into one!

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BUMP  
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7 posted 2000-11-16 06:25 PM


wow, a tribute to two people within 17 syllables!!Not bad at all
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8 posted 2000-11-16 09:04 PM


I believe you all must agree, Interloper will find a niche in Haiku...

Karilea
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9 posted 2004-04-18 08:42 PM


yeah...that's cool!
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