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SEA and the Sunshine . . . Haiku or ?
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SEA and the Sunshine . . . Haiku or ? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA and the Sunshine Always there for you and me Tidal and warming Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes it's a haiku...one that I liked...good work Interloper! Elizabeth |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I wouldn't care if it was a Haiku or not, I loved it!!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Not just a haiku. But a very lovley one! Poeminister |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA! Look what Interloper did...two "forevers" into one! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BUMP |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wow, a tribute to two people within 17 syllables!!Not bad at all  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I believe you all must agree, Interloper will find a niche in Haiku... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...that's cool! |
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